Reviews for Casualties of War

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Necrovore 2006-10-12 ch 5,	abuseAny chance of this being continued?
nejitenfan 2006-09-23 ch 5,	abuseplease update soon
nejitenfan 2006-09-22 ch 3,	abusethis realy cool
Government Paranoia 2006-06-28 ch 5,	abusePlease update soon! This fic is totally awesome and I wanna see where the story goes. If you don't update, I might die of a broken heart, and you wouldn't want that on your conscience, would you?
Luc Star 2005-09-22 ch 5,	abuseok.. i am not certain if you are working on this fic still but i would very much like it if you took the time to update. i loved the way this story started and i am probably going to love whichever way the story is heading. take care and update soon. and hey.. bloody brilliant fight scene.
Bubba Hyde 2004-07-16 ch 5,	abuseGreat plot and great character development with Rahne and especially X23. Most people who attempt to write about her cant capture the inner conflict that a character like that is bound to possess. I'm interested to see how this turns out. -by the way, thanks for the review of my work, I hope I can do a little better job on the 2nd half.
X00001 2004-04-29 ch 5,	abusegreat capter love the fighting in it keep up the good work
Risty 2004-04-28 ch 5,	abuseWow - the fight definitely was, well... bloody and brutal. But all the better for it - not only was it more realistic than most fights you read, it was also paced better, so that you got the right sense of the speed and difficulty involved. Plus there were blood and guts! yay! (Sorry, physiology student in me there). Considering the amount of gore and so on in the fight though, you might want to consider upping the story's rating to avoid the wrath of the powers-that-be at ffnet... Anyway, there were some really great moments through this... Gauntlet's twisted mind thinking the onlookers were cheering for him, and especially the heartburn line. I loved that (i know, I'm sick ;) ).
The Uncanny R-Man 2004-04-28 ch 5,	abuseThis was great! How do you kill a cyborg with a healing factor? Shove a greanade down his throat! HA! Great stuff! I can't wait to see where you go with this! Especially Moira's reaction to the fact that Rahne's pregnant! R-Man
X00001 2004-04-21 ch 4,	abusegreat chapter can't wait to see who the fight goes
Risty 2004-04-20 ch 4,	abuseI've always thought that the mobs outside abortion clinics are barbaric - Rahne's decision and motivations are fine, and anyone else who decides like her, but abusing girls who go to get abortions is a shameless attempt at emotional blackmail and psychological scarring at what is already probably the most difficult decision these girls will ever make. That's a comment on life, not this story. Yeah, I'm pro-choice,enough said. I think you might have been a little unfair toward the doctor - he came across very unfeeling and bigoted. Abortion doctors are usually very well trained in social work/psychotherapy type things. All that aside, I liked this chapter. You do X-23 quite differently from other people I've seen (a lot more mature) but it works very well. And I'm looking forward to this fight with Gauntlet.
The Uncanny R-Man 2004-04-20 ch 4,	abuseThis is getting better by the moment! Last time it was Deadpool, now it' Rahne and X-23 watching Roadrunner on the TV! Oh, and the 'St Crios Hotel?' Great in-joke! I can't wait to see where you go with this! And by the way, any chance of another Deadpool appearance? R-Man
Risty 2004-04-18 ch 3,	abuseWell, well. Nice introduction of Deadpool into the Evoverse there. Fits. Rahne not wanting to get rid of the fetus fitted nicely with character too. And Bobby as Roberto makes everything make sense. Although having him as Bobby in the comics still confuses me half the time. After reading in the name of science as well, I have to say I'm always amused by the names of your characters - John Calvin, B.F Skinner, and now Peter Jackson... amusing. One thing - thru should be be spelt through.
WerewolfLass 2004-04-18 ch 3,	abuseOh, SUSPENSE. i Like it!
The Uncanny R-Man 2004-04-18 ch 3,	abuseDeadpool? falls of chair in amazement YAY!! Deadpool rules! You got his personality perfect! Who's the father to Rahne's kid? Update soon R-Man ^_~

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