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| AnitaCoffee 2004-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWoah. That was amazing. I'm making fish faces because I'm speechless. Wow. *shakes your hand* Now I have touched greatness... ;P :D |
| AJV 2004-04-19 ch 1, | abuseGod, that's beautiful. It's perfect and it makes me hurt to read it, but I loved every second of it. |
| JenT 2004-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Such a great vingette. |
| wyldheart 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was amazing -- I especially loved the "playballwithjoemcguire..." type lines. (Can't figure out what to call them, but you know the ones... ;)The second person POV, rain as a recurring theme, and the ending were all awesome. Great fic! |
| Melanie-Anne 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abuseVery, very nice. I'm not usually a fan of second person voice but you made it work. |