Well done.Do a San Andreas one

O la la! Sweet stuff.

Nice contrast and giving it such a descriptive 'twang'.

I liked it!

There's not a lot of GTA poetry. This is a nice change. It actually shows that despite looks, Vice City isn't a great place.

Hope to read some more of your poetry!

(Thanks for reviewing my story, by the way :P )

It sucked, I mean that was the most worst thing I ever read U SUCK. plus it had nothing to do with Tommy Versety and he is the star of that game U SUKC u realy do

...That was the awesomest thing ever... o_o

But seriously, that was... there are no words... o_o

Seriously I never thought that it was possiable towrite a poem about GTA and make it worth reading!
I love your work You should keed doing things like this!

That
Was
Fricken Awesome.

I love your poem! Very well written! Very, very good! You are a great poet. Keep up the outstanding work. Lots of detail really brought this to life. Way to go!