That was very thoughful. I enjoyed it. You should continue it. It was perfect for what I thought Lantis was thinking about during that time.

This was really good! I loved it!

hey! i like it! it gives emphasis to hikaru's 'effect' on lantis. yeah, i really do agree that she's one who brought his emotions back. but then, as in this fic, you've also empahsized on lantis' sadness. wish you can continue this one and then take off lantis' sadness...using hikaru...boy, that would be, definitely, romantic. ;-) great work!

Hmm... I liked this. I really feel for Lantis, he's such a good guy, just so... detached from his emotions. +sigh+ I guess my only problem with reading this was there was no feeling of completion. But the overwhelming angst more than makes up for it. Good job, keep writing! Cheers.