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Taeniaea 2008-06-19 ch 16,	abusegreat story
vintage.soul494 2008-04-24 ch 2,	abuseJust found your fic and I'm really enjoying it so far. :) I did notice one thing though, you mention at the beginning of the chapter that Alec is comfortable in the cold wearing nothing but a long sleeve t-shirt but at the end of the chapter you having him pull a gun out from under his jacket. I miss stuff like that all the time in my writing and I wish people would point it out to me, so please don't take me mentioning it the wrong way, cuz its not a criticism at all. I'm just trying to be helpful. :)
Nefhiliel 2008-04-08 ch 16,	abuseThis is a really good story, I think you've got most of the characters down excellently... Poor Max! locked in a coffin with an IV... that would seriously suck some major suckage. Love the story, can't wait for more of The Storm to come, lol I actually started reading that one first, oh well!
Nefhiliel 2008-03-30 ch 3,	abuseLoving the story so far, nice intereseting twists and insight into what happens after Freak Nation. The only thing I'd have to disagree with: Alec's name isn't Alec Cora, it's Alec McDowell, I forgot where I got the information, but the scene that had that information on his employment file was cut from the show. Made me mad, but oh well. lol Poor Logan, just been told his love and his good friend are dead... hehe!
CPAnthoni 2008-01-05 ch 16,	abusereally enjoying your continuation. thanks!
Anaknusan 2008-01-03 ch 16,	abuseI would like to state for the record that this is one of the most well thought out and planned stories I think I've ever read on fanfiction and I give my congratulations to you, along with my envy that you are such a great writer. Excuse me while I go off to read more of your work, I'm addicted. ~A
The Blind Apprentice 2007-12-28 ch 16,	abuseI found your story by accident. Having been a fan of DA and thoroughly enjoying the Max Allan Collins adaptations, your stry was one to get the DA juices flowing again. I haven't written a fic for DA yet, ut if I do, it'll be a Manticore fic and it'll probly be fairly close to canon, although I'm not sure how yet. I'm kinda tired of all the MA ML stuff going on at Manticore, so we're going to go back and exlore what training for X Series was like from their as well as their handler's POVs. That's all I got so far. Don't forget to keep us posted on the new fic, I definitly wanna keep reading. The Blind Apprentice
blackrose9 2007-12-24 ch 16, anon.	abusethis is great cant wait for the second part
Karah06 2007-12-23 ch 16,	abuseWow, i love this story so much! You never cease to amaze me! I love the detail, it makes me feel like it's an episode of the actual show. Seriously, it's very well done. I am excited for the next part! I want to see more of Zack and her other family! I am curious to discovering whether or not Zack will have feelings for Max still :) personally, I am rooting for Max/Alec, but I love drama. Even without pairings though, I would still read this. It is just so awesome to pass up. You seem to be getting more reviews now, but people do not know what they are missing! This is a realistically building story(given the DA universe), and keeps me in total suspense on what is going on, who is getting together with who, and who is behind what. Sorry! I am rambling, but i seriously am addicted to this story. You deserve 25 times the amount of reviews you have. Great job, looking forward to the next part. Happy Holidays!
iluvaqt 2007-12-22 ch 16,	abuseI feel so lucky, I came in just when the last chapter's posted and the new part about to begin. :) You've done a wonderful job so far. I can't wait to get into what happens next. My instinct tells me that Deck and Otto are working together, perhaps to reunite Max with Sandeman. Curious to find out how Alec deals with the news that they lost Max. Wish you a Happy Holidays, thank you for the early Christmas present.
iluvaqt 2007-12-19 ch 15,	abuseI'm truly astonished that this doesn't have more reviews. Yes it might be a long time in the making but it's a really interesting and well written story. You pace well, the characters are spot on and you have no trouble writing any of the canons. I loved the Herbal inclusion and Sketchy has a Transgenic girlfriend. Cute. I hope she's not just using it as a cover to stay close to him. She seems genuine. I only caught one typo. I think it was in Sketchy's media debut. SW1 instead of S1W. Also my first impression of Melissa was that she was Syl but the fact that Max didn't recognise her made me rethink. She's not a clone of Cece either... Maybe Alec would know her. You're doing a great job. Looking forward to more.
br9 2007-12-06 ch 15, anon.	abuseyour story is like watching the show. i love it. cant wait for more.
Karah06 2007-12-05 ch 15,	abusewow, i really love your progression of things. You are excellent writer and you should have five times the amount of reviews you do. People are missing out! I know there aren't any pairings in this, but i like to think they are a few :) Anyway, this story is excellent, I can't wait to see what happens next.
JohnF 2007-12-04 ch 15, anon.	abuseHi, As far as I am aware, this is the only Dark Angel fan fiction that drew from the Max Collins book series. I read all 15 chapters to date in one sitting, and am looking forwards to the rest. Thanks!
Random person 2007-11-26 ch 14, anon.	abusePlease keep writting, I had begun reading this when you re-done it, its still good as ever.

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