wOW, that was intense, I loved it! Even the vague way you explained the lemon was all about the atmosphere of sex and the build up, creating the mood. Just wow, although, it did leave me very sad, poor Eiji. I suppose, it's just me being a little dense, but that last part about translating English into Japanese, what are you trying to get across? That Eiji feels betrayed because Ash said he'd always be there with him? Or something else...

Well, almost everything was wonderfully well-done, except the quite-very-wrong character portrayal. Sexual emotions were powerfully well-described in suspense.
You have a good talent at writing. Quite impressive.

Ash would NEVER ever mock at Eiji with such eyes, NOT even laughing at such unprofessional gun handling. NOWHERE, it did illustrate in the OFFICIAL BF story. *icy cold tone*

Yes, I will NOT put your story in my favorites folder. I really find this slight completely unforgivable, even with the sorta nice ending.

^.^ M...kawaii!

Oh, /wow/. Scratch the Saiyuki--you need to write more BF.

This was so IC. Ahsomuchlove. Thank you.

I would love to review this story, but first...

::stands in silent awe for a moment::

This was incredibly wonderful. The richness of the sensory discriptions was perfect without being overwhelming. The ending was just the right side of enigmatic, evoking lingering sadness and hope at once. Character thoughts and actions were presented with minimalist perfection.

This is definately going on my Favorites list.

yeah, that was sweet :D I've only read two volumes as well, but was needing some smut ;p Instead of going to buy the seven that are out already, I'm waiting till the lot are re-released unflipped. great work :)

Now THIS was such a nice surprise~! This brings the Banana Fish fic writers up to a grand total of what... 4? ^^;; I totally loved this story! Your writing ability is solid and your story is just wonderful! I hope you decide to create more BF stories in the future~! ^_^

This is dazzling. I didn't realize how much I needed some really good BF smut until I read this story. And it's quite good--one of the best fics in this category, in my opinion. It's so tactile and vivid, and yes, barely fitting within that R rating. (*blush*) I'm going to have to work harder to keep up. ^_^ I hope you write more--this fandom needs as many talented fanficcers as it can get!