wonderful!

this is great. very nice. i loved it and that song is perfect.

how do you do it? this is absolutely awesome! i love trily too so that makes it even better! keep makin stuff like this, it's the greatest!

*schlobic*

I loved this one, its was so sweet and kind, not rough and rushed.

Yum. Beyond the mush, however... I love your style - nice and mature. Thanks for writing this :)

wow. that was great. one of the best RFR fics i've read so far. keep up the good work.

I loved it, I am a huge trilyfan as well, I wish it wasn't just a one-shot, awesome story, i was hooked, the words spoke to me and the emotion was over-whelming, its like the story carried me away to a world of realistic fiction in Roscoe, I was amazed with your work, GREAT STORY!
!amanda!

This is not bad, there are some points that could be improved but it's a really good story.
Are you going to continue it?
Very angsty by the way at the end.

Very good. Very very good.
I love your writing style. It is so wonderful to have such a talented writer for RFR, and its an extra plus that you're a Trily fan :)
I am anxiously awaiting more stories by you.

Wow! Awsome! I hope you write s'more. That song really went along with the fic too. Or, the fic really went along with the song...? Anyway. like I said, please write more soon. We need more Trily.
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Sincerely
AlannaBanana

That was such a cute story. Did it have to be a one-shot one? It should have been continued. Oh well that was good.