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| Mizamour 2005-08-17 ch 1, | abuseOh no, so sad...wow, that was good though... |
| KaraAnnsCousin 2004-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a wonderful short!! i like all your stories actaully, you are so not 12! |
| Toff 2004-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI love the Hunyak. Very good portrayal! Good work: I expect nothing less : D |
| kagura37 2004-05-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty good. It was a really short chapter though. If you're going to continue it, which I hope you are, you should make the next chapters longer. But it was overall good. ~Kagura~ |
| beetle654 2004-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThe poor, poor Hunyak. Of all the characters in Chicago, the only innocent, the one who was treated like dirt, and the only woman hanged. Great story, really well written. |
| Vikki Kelly 2004-04-18 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I love this! You writing style is tremendous, and utterly unbelievable for your age...This is really good. Keep writing Chicago fics. Now darling, about my story! I love all your reviews...I'm not sure if I'm more flattered or frightened. Definitely one of the two, if not both. lol But yes, I've been in the process of updating/finishing my fic since your first recent review about 2 days ago...Don't worry I'm not abandoning it, I promise. I've been really busy as well, and now I just have to figure out how to put the ending together. Besides I'm working on 2 more fics...another being Chicago! ;D Well sorry for the long review, but I didn't know how else to get in contact with you. And yes I LOVE this lil story. Keep it real, Vikki Kelly (Kit-Kat) |
| HonestlyRachel 2004-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abusecool! but why not separate the paragraphs? |
| razoemouthrachel, who is to... 2004-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseNo one ever does anything about Hunyak. I'm glad you did, I've always wondered what her story was. --rachel |