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chocolate11 2008-11-27 . chapter 27
ugh! i luv ur story! and i swear if u dont continue i will find u and hunt u down! lol. just joking. but really this is better than anythig i could have ever writen!
QAM-Andy 2008-11-08 . chapter 27
Damn, that was exciting well written 27 chapters. Completely love it, I hope you up date soon. ^-^
smcandy 2008-09-21 . chapter 25
I'm lo9ving this despite being my second time reading this story I cannot get enough of it.

Oh U have to update and continue this story until you reach the end entirely (^^)

~smcandy~
smcandy 2008-09-21 . chapter 22
Yeah I remeber those fout part episodes I think on th epanther tribe I found them ok but your are doing well with your story.

This is the second time i have red this story the first was off of your A single spark account. I hoep you'll continue this I find U are doing very well and very detailed with everything here i feel as though I can see this chapter made into epsidoes you have such good work doing detail and everything.

Good work continue updating this story until you reach the finalie.

~smcandy~
twilightotaku 2008-09-02 . chapter 27
I LOVE THIS FANFIC! yet you haven't updated for years! please please plesae plesase plesae please please PLEASE update soon!im beggin you!
The Midnightmoonflower 2008-08-29 . chapter 27
Aw WHY WHY,Won't you complete the story?! It is a very good story please finish it before I find you and make you!
Modern Monk 2008-08-26 . chapter 27
Hey Eiune,

Nice story!

I like the way you developed the Hikage storyline, though I think that more intrigue could be possible. Sesshomaru's emotions seemed to change too fast, the way he treated Kagome in general.

In this chapter, I think it was good how you laid the foundation as what I see as Kagura's betrayal, but I was hoping for you to avoid a war episode, because that just seems really cliche. So far, so good though. The writing, and its also really nice how you only recently began to look into their thoughts about each other. Makes it less repetitive.

-Namoru
GreenQueen08 2008-08-20 . chapter 27
i love it!
knifethrower 2008-08-09 . chapter 27
I add my voice to the many reviewers who have requested that you continue "As My Daughter Wishes". It is of excellent quality, well-written on many levels. The way you developed the characters in this story rates very high in my estimation. I found the story extremely creative and I loved the way you described how the relationships of all of the characters evolved. Now I hate to let it go! So many Sesshomaru/Kagome fics have no plot, twist the characters beyond recognition, and are just generally feeble, but this is one of the exceptions, and it is so sad that you want to abandon it. Please, reconsider...
ichleibeyouko 2008-08-02 . chapter 27
aw, u should update!
its really good.
Jaddasroots 2008-07-31 . chapter 3
Oh wow, I liked it,
XxCrescentMoonxX 2008-07-31 . chapter 27
You know sometimes being your own worst critic makes you blind to the potential your own story possesses. I'm not going to make this long because I'm sure you don't want to hear this.

I've been reading fanfiction for a long time now. I've read numerous stories from the worst to they very best. And to me, it seems that this story of yours is one of the good ones. It had so much potential that it pained me when I found out that you probably never ever have any plans for continuing this. I originally found your story on A-Single-Spark(which unfortunately has closed down). From there I tracked you down all the way to here.

I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. It does not seem like a 16-year old girl wrote this. And I am truly sorry if you think that this story reflects badly on your high school years.

Well I tried not making this long but it seems as if it is unavoidable. I wanted to let you know that I truly enjoyed your story and it was kind of depressing to find out that you had abandoned this. In my years of reading fanfiction I felt that this was one of a kind. And for some reason unknown to myself I had to let you know this. I could not just read this story and not leave a review.

I wish you luck in your future writings.
Silverbug2012 2008-06-26 . chapter 27
I really, really like this Fanfiction. I hope that you will update soon! I see it's been almost three years sense you updated last. I wish you luck in all of your other stories as well. Silverbug2012
Killerbat91 2008-06-15 . chapter 27
usually I like the lemons to just happen but I really like your story. I like how it draws it out but let something happen like a kiss or something just to keep it interesting if you want but then again it is your story lol
Killerbat91 2008-06-15 . chapter 24
Bless Jerry's family in their time or grief
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