 Magentian 2005-03-02 . chapter 1Aww... that was so sweet. You manage Irvine quite well - an excellent take on a personal side that, in-game, rarely comes out unless one is watching for it. I especially love the definition of Irvine as a 'skittish' person - probably because I can identify. ^^
Good job. |
 Rushi Firefly 2004-11-01 . chapter 1Very nice. I quite like Irvine/Selphie, considering I usually dislike canon major character pairings and I would much rather see a dozen more Irvine/Selphie pairings written this excellently, than a hundred moderately good Squinoa's or Seiftis'. |
 lynnxlady 2004-04-23 . chapter 1Huh, I didn't get an Author's Alert for this. But today I was flipping through my list of favorite author's, seeing if anyone had anything new up in their bio about future updates, and I found this. :) I was very happy, and all, "Kitt wrote Irvine/Selphie!"
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And it was well-done, as usual. You've got a great handle on Irvine and your take on his past is interesting. I also really like how Selphie accepted it all without knowing - but then of course she still wanted to know. It was a little touch that fits Selphie, that is deep and meaningful and made me smile at the same time. |
 Thyamant 2004-04-18 . chapter 1It's been the best starting I could have asked for in a Selvin ^^
The characters are so real, and just in the first chapter you find all you'll want to see from those two... Well the rest is up to you and I hope you give us more of this magic ^^
_Isa-chan_ Thyamant@hotmail.com |
 Dumber then a Moogle ass 2004-04-18 . chapter 1Wow! Great chapter! I like your take on Irvine. I didn't really like FFVI, but you've made me see it in a new light. (Or just some of the characters anyway. lol) I hope you're planning on continuing this story! I'll stick with you all the way! Yayness! I hope you're updating soon. Do it for the dying Moogles! :P What will Selphie think of him once he spills the beans? Oh, she'll still love him. You know she will. ;) See you next chapter! :D |
 Wind Maester 2004-04-18 . chapter 1Great atmosphere, and I don't usually see fics where Irvine really becomes serious and cool, the way he is here, and it's a refreshing change. Don't compare this fic with the others, cos it stands out better, and I think the essence of Irvine's characteristics are so clearly written. A very nice and down-to-earth intepretation of him, and I like the way you used the phrase 'moths to flame'. Fantastic piece you have here. =) |
 Verdanii 2004-04-18 . chapter 1Great start, Chickie ^-^ |
 Kitian 2004-04-17 . chapter 1Heartwarming and very in-character, "Road to Somewhere" is the ideal Irvine/Selphie fic. You did a wonderful job of playing on the insecurities in Irvine that were hinted at in the game while explaining his actions. Very, very nice piece. |