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vampyrgirl1997
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abusei love it!
yellowy
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abusegood description and everything but not so supportive of him falling in the river...
xXInnocently-DeviousXx
2007-08-08
ch 1,
abuseWow this one was very informative... It makes sence of what could have happened to him after he left the tent but I'm a lil bit confused. Didn't Heather and Michael hear Josh screaming for them night after night. That's how they find the house looking for him. Although It might have bin someone pretending to be him to lure them in... well good story!
Jordan O'Leary
2006-11-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey,this is one cool story, its genuine and quite creepy, I like the way you have added real parts from the movie (kids screaming etc), its really cool. I would say its the best story for the blair witch genre in th is area of the site, good job!
Google Girl11
2006-10-30
ch 1,
abuseEw...descriptive...not bad, except if he fell in the stream, don't you think that his body would be found?
I am the devil
2006-07-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseYES! STAB THAT **! Josh was being a ** to the great lord above! He deserves to ** die! **...YOU...JOSH!
The name doesn't matter
2005-05-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseIf this is your first fanfic, I am greatly impressed. Mostly with your discription.
Ami-Lili
2004-12-02
ch 1,
abuseWow! I really could imagine that! Now any time I think about that movie I'm going to imagine Josh dying like that...whoa!
tgmoxie
2004-10-25
ch 1,
abuseVery good. I always had *wondered* what happened to Josh. My only nit would be a mispelling of *heart* at the end. I had to reread it to understand and that took away some of the shock.
Buffyrules
2004-10-01
ch 1,
abuseIm not really into BWP but this story was alright. I like it. The rating is a bit off but who cares.
Eternal Deadly Fever
2004-07-04
ch 1,
abuseWow! Truly amazing fic! Congrats!
Elliroc
2004-06-12
ch 1,
abusewoa, this is very good writing!
fuck
2004-06-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat story Haley! Love BWP! And LOVE this story! Very nasty, great! lol
katt
2004-05-12
ch 1, anon.
abusewow! very intense i think, pretty good. i wish i could write like that. yay for u : )
LordBlueMist
2004-05-09
ch 1,
abuseExcruciatingly obvious advice: USE THE MPAA RATING SYSTEM. This should be a definite R.
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