Oh, goodness. I really like your imagery in this. And Hakuryuu's dragon dreams.

wow, that's a really deatailed stream of conscousness you have there, it's fascinating to read.
good technique!

Beautifully written. I love it _ Keep on writing ne?

hehe, deep work. got a slight angst factor (hm, ironic? hehe) very nicely written - surely u jest that english is a language you've never spoken. anyhow...nice 383 piece. wish u can write sumting longer ne? hehe...ja!

Interesting...