Short and VERY emotional...I cried

love it i would like to here more

love ya angel

OH MY GOD! it is short but AWESOME.

I loved this, Flare! I feel so bad for Dally. I actually cried a couple of times when I saw the movie. Well, I hope you keep up the good work. I love The Outsiders. This piece of work was excellent to the bone.

Well, lol, I like it, but I'm not quite sure what to think about it. It's a good little paragraph, but I think it could've been better if you had made it into more of a short story or a poem. It was all right either way. Good job.

wow. great fic, besides the fact that it was ONE PARAGRAPH! *changes back into normal self* nah, it was great. short and sweet. awesome! *GREAT JOB!*

Wow. Great, just great. I loved it. Almost cried.

*whimpers* that was sad...but very good. short, sad, and good...nice work.
*rocky*

short but impactive =]

fabulous... Such a short but powerful piece.
Scarlett

had to make me cry didn't ya? gr
it was good... *sniffle*

beautiful...though very short. But it's quality not quantity right? ^^ Uhm, it reminds me of that cartoon where bugs bunny is tricking elmer and he's all, "it's getting dark...*cough*" Well anyhow, i love those cartoons and I love this little fic. Lol