 Jaenelle Angelline 2004-04-21 . chapter 1Who can say for certain/ Maybe you're still here/ I feel you all around me/ Your memory's so clear/ Deep in the stillness/ I can hear you speak/ You're still an inspiration/ Can it be...
That you are my/ Forever love/ And you are watching over me/ From up above...
Fly/ Me up to where you are/ Beyond the distant star/ I wish upon tonight to see you smile/ If only for a while/ To know you're there/ A breath away's not far/ To where you are.
Are you gently sleeping/ Here inside my dreams/ And isn't faith believing/ All power can't be seen/ As my heart holds you/ Just one beat away/ I cherish all you gave me/ Every day...
'Cause you are my/ Forever love/ Watching me from up above/ And i believe / That angels breathe/ And that love will live on/ And never leave...
Fly/ Me up to where you are/ Beyond the distant star/ I wish upon tonight to see you smile/ If only for a while/ To know you're there/ A breath away's not far/ To where you are/ I know you're there/ A breath away's not far/ To where you are.
For some reason, that song came to mind while I was reading this story, and I felt like i had to share it with you. It was sung, oddly enough, by another Josh. Josh Groban, in this case. It's called 'To Where You Are'. I don't know, maybe it was just that one phrase you used 'She was watching him from up above' that brought this song to mind.
Anyway, I wanted to tell you that the story was great. You've got a couple of typos, and some grammatical imperfections, but the story's still a jewel. I've been so wrapped up in the two novellas I'm writing now I haven't checked out the new stuff, or you would have heard from me sooner. Je suis desole, as the French say. My apologies. I'm adding this to my faves list, by the way, and I shall go read some of your other stuff as soon as I'm finished the four stories I'm working on now. |