God, use the fucking enter key!

OH! You really know how to rip a girl's heart out! Poor MaryKate, and poor Kazuma too! I'm glad I've finally seen Fruba and read this story, it's great!

Favorite line:

"It’s all I can do to keep my hands off him." Ah, don't we all feel that way about Kyo!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Okay, right now I'd like to apologize for two things. First: having to use drastic measures to contact you. I did not read your story that I'm 'reviewing' it's the only way I can contact you at this point in time. So I'm sorry to bring your hopes up and then crash them down.

Second: No, dear, your computer did not have a glitch or anything of that sort, it was rather a case of me being computer retarded. I do'nt know how, but somehow I did put up the wrong chapter, so I apologize. However the problem is solved so now you can really read 'Running Late'.

Once again I'm sorry that I'm leaving you a 'false review'. I had tried contacting you via e-mail, but if you go on my bio, you'll see what my problem is.

Larie-chan

Aw! that was really sad! Great picture though... I always felt bad for the Sensei.

Good work on this and your Tokio/Saito story!

please continue!
ml,
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Good beginning. I hate seeing some fics without reviews. Update!