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| DoloresHayes 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI was hoping for a writing style more along the line of the voice of "Rachel" or even "Deckard", but it was a bit too flowery...I'm a total "Blade Runner" fanatic, so maybe I'm prejudiced, but I'd prefer to see it written in a more stark, dismal manner. None of the characters in "Blade Runner" seemed happy, exc. J.F. Sebastien, and he gets killed! P.S., have you ever read the original novel by Philip K. Dick? It REALLY explains a lot of what you say "HUH?" to in the film! :) |
| meowrunner 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was sad. You're a good writer. Poor girl...:( |
| night animal 2004-10-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I don't consider myself easily moved, but this was painful. You write very well! |
| ArchRamius 2004-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm a bit confused... I like the piece but who is the speaker? Surely not Pris She's very dead dead. Also, Deckard didn't kill Roy, his lifespan expired. So is this an original character who simply didn't see everything that transpired? |