Yo I read the other DEsperation and they are different this is more sad and is Gaz' Pov

Great Story you get an A+ I think she should move in with Zim heheheh

Poor Gaz so thats why she wears that necklace

Your making me cry wahh

Old story...
Anyway... you made me cry. I seriously cried a bit reading that. It was so heart-wrenching. The third suicide/self-injuring Invader Zim story I've read today. Can't be good for my emotions. *sighs*

Good story.

But sheesh, you really need to learn when to use 'me' and 'I'.
For instance: 1) "Life doesn’t care about you and I."
2)"When she was alive, she felt as if she wasn’t good enough for Dad, Dib, and I."
3) "If only Dad cared more about Dib and I than his career."
4) "I don’t want you to give up like Mom and I."
In all four of those sentences you should end with 'me'. 'I' makes them grammatically incorrect, okay?

SEQUEL!

So sad. It made me cry.

Excellently written with a good message. It's so sad yet I'm glad she had the strength to go on!

I...am crying. I'm emotionally touched by your words that you have typed. I normally do not cry (trust me, I don't), but this has touched my soul. I like your other works as well and I think your ending was not sucky at all. I will remember your great works forever.

Standing Ovaltine! I mean... Ovation and two thumbs up for the point of view change which made the story more interesting.

P.S: E-mail me at darksplinter@ so I can give you a few plot ideas.

I like it Alicia, even though i don't like invader zim the story itself has substance.YOU ROCK DUDE! Anyway its a good story over all and well written. Good Job! See you on monday!
~Sarra

Wow, so sad. I loved the way you wrote the characters, it was amazingly perfect sounding. Poor Gaz and Dib, I love how even after Dib kills himself, their dad just works more, how sick. I liked how the other girls said that Gaz grew up eating kitten heads, made me giggle. Awesome, so sad, didn't promote suicide at all if ya ask me!

that was amazing...it brought tears to my eyes, and let me tell you, that's not an easy thing to do. it sounds just like the way my life is, parents that don't give two ** what i do, and yet you didn't go overboard with the whole "my life sucks, pity me" on Gaz's part...i applaud this, it is definently going on my favorites.

Hey, you updated!

Finally... at long last Gaz realizes SHE herself is part of the reason Dib offed himself; finally she realizes what a JERK she has been and how self-centered she is.

Too bad Dib had to die for that to happen.

I can't help but wonder what the sentence beginning, "I mean, even Gaz-" went on to say. That was no doubt something Gaz desperately NEEDED to see.

Hey, Gaz...

That Dib never hit you back does not say he is a "wimp" as loudly as it screams that YOU are a BULLY! Dib's mother died too... and one thing he did not need after that was you kicking and punching him. When your mother kills herself and you have to learn to survive on your own with a violent sister who treats you like a punching bag, yeah well, I suppose THAT must do something to you too.

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Great story, one that pulls no punches.

Se-quel... Se-quel! Tacomaster's Papercut deals, and rather well at that, with similar material.

That was beautiful...you`re going to my favorite authors list for sure...

I love Gaz...she is so much like me...

But there`s no time to tell my life story to ya, i`m sure some ppl wouldn`t care about it anyway..

You`re very good at sad stories,as for me,i suck,i can only do good on pointless humorous stories,read them if you want. See ya..

With care,
Dark Bijou