This is one of the few stories iv read that was detailed correctly understand it sufficiently very good job to you and please continue

AH! why the heck did u end it with a cliff! UPDATE! please? lol ;) u get a cookie for a great story *round of applause* i love it! update soon i need to know! :)

ohoho. love it exeedingly. please continue to write! just like robin and raven i am thinking "what happens next?" hehe. i wounder how star will react to this..i hope she cries. is she does i will laugh in her genaral direction

hahahaha! i was laughing SO loud when i read the hive saying the team rocket thing! and my sister was wondering what the heck was wrong with me. a bit much of pokemon or however you spell it. i dobnt think it blends with the hive graduates very well. but i likey the story! you are a really good writer and i know i probly suck compared to you...but is it ok if u read my story the other prophecy? like past the fist chapter cuz the fist one is way lame. it has to many OCs though...you dont have to but i really want youre opnion on it.

I certainly enjoyed this chapter, and can appreciate the difficulty in writing it. Huzzah for Beast Boy getting kicked to the curb! And what does happen next? Favorite line: "Actually it's more 40/60." Though "I hate parachutes" is a close second. Love the dialogue, the introspection, and the imagery. Keep it up!

Very good description of evil-demon Raven. You scared me, and that's a feat. Loved the three misfits as pseudo-Team Rocket, I guess that makes Gizmo the Meowth. Poor guy. In any case, your fight scene was a little smoother this time, extra points for the attacks :) Can't wait to read the next one (which I won't have to, since I'm going to now...)

Good job on the first chapter. I enjoyed the language at the beginning, it's a different style than usual. Favorite line: "Oh well. I hated that thing anyway." I also enjoyed the destruction of the generic gaming device...Interesting how it was her target and that point in both conversations...Well, looking forward to the next chapter!

yay

hey where is the rest of the story. i want to know what the others say about their relationship and wheter or not raven gets her wish.

I like a lot. Great story. I finally finished it after being kicked of 3 times. I like it, but I wanna know what else happens. Hurry up and update!

It's a very good start. Robin was sorta wishy-washy but it just makes the story better. Keep writing.

Lots of love,

Raven Hunda

Very interesting. What is there to say? You made the characters come alive. And as always the song lyrics fit in beautifully. Please update soon.

Urgh, something horrid has happened... will not let me update every time i try i get kicked off the net and so i have resorted to bugging you into updating *your* fic. Update I say!

Not done reading but I just had to put in a quick two cents...

::“It’s like the chicken says ‘You knew the job was dangerous when you took it’.

I laughed so hard at the pokemon reference. That was just cute. But so far I love this story. Ive been reading your works and they are all good. No wonder I thought you were the best reviewer I had for my story. Your own works are wonderful. *goes to read next chapter*