  shru 2004-09-26 . chapter 2 Hun, you seem to have your tenses and genders mixed up. is heero seeing a boy or a girl? if he told everyone he saw a girl, then why would wufei say 'boy'? its kinda confusing, unless its meant to be like that, but i don't feel that's the case. |
 pattyard 2004-09-25 . chapter 9Sorry It took me so long to review,I found your story very well written, you are a talented writer..I thought that this was or is an excellent story. . I am always reading drama or humor stories depending on what mood I'm in and I found this one of the few good one's out there. So I thank you for writing this story for me and everyone else to read.So again please update soon.. NOTE: If you find the same review for more than one chapter of your story, It is because I just go home and read everything in my in box and have done another mass review ...But believe me I mean every word of this review and want to read more of everyone's stories...^_~ |
| pattyard 2004-09-25 . chapter 3 Sorry It took me so long to review,I found your story very well written, you are a talented writer..I thought that this was or is an excellent story. . I am always reading drama or humor stories depending on what mood I'm in and I found this one of the few good one's out there. So I thank you for writing this story for me and everyone else to read.So again please update soon.. NOTE: If you find the same review for more than one chapter of your story, It is because I just go home and read everything in my in box and have done another mass review ...But believe me I mean every word of this review and want to read more of everyone's stories...^_~ |
| pattyard 2004-04-30 . chapter 2 This is a verry good story please update,update,update,update now... |
| Tattooed-On-My-Memory 2004-04-29 . chapter 2 hmm. I like it, makes you think. Anyway, I hope you can update soon! I really look forward to reading the next chapter! |
| aspara 2004-04-28 . chapter 2 . . . eh? |
| rosedreams 2004-04-28 . chapter 2 You keep switching genders for Duo during the content. You are not using details, but jumping from action to action w/out smoothing the transition. You need a beta. |
| Funny Bunny 2004-04-28 . chapter 2 Meies likies, updaties soonies! |
| Tattooed-On-My-Memory 2004-04-19 . chapter 1 ^_^ I like it! It's a really cool idea! hope you update soon! |
| Tica 2004-04-18 . chapter 1 This story looks really interesting! hope to see more of it soon! |
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