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| hi 2008-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abusei really liked this but since it was written so long ago im guessing you dropped it? |
| TanukiHanyouSahana 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseIt was quite intersesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. E-mail me when it's done. |
| Athena1999 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abusePlease update! This is a very intriguing story which will be added to my list of favorites. |
| Half Kracker 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseIt's been quite sometime since I have actually read/watched/ or even have anything to do with Digimon. I remember the first time you actually posted this story. It didn't make much sense to me. Now, well now it does. I must say you have a wonderful acheivement here. I love the description you've got going with this. It's very excellent and well rounded. Though, it doesn't really seem to be like "Dracala" I do believe that's what you was reading when you did this story the first time? It actually reminds me much of Vanhellsing. Love the movie for some strange reason. (Laughs) My question is, who really is Hikaru? But, I guess that will be answered in a much later time. But right now, it's a decent start. Hmm, it would have been much nicer to see it a bit lenghter for the first chapter than it is. But I can't complain. We all have to stop somewhere and even if you had it as a five-hundred word chapter you'd probably be able to do an excellent job with it just like this. Well, your dialogue is fresh your writing is clean and your description is far-out to be very well written. No mistakes from what I have seen. Congrats. Keep up the good work. Hope to see another chapter out soon Karen. Ja Ne |
| Gamezoner66 2005-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseive always wondered what would happen if that idiot* finally succeded[Vandemon}* |
| Gennai's Apprentice 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI always had a soft spot for post-apocalypitc stories. While I haven't read the previous version, I think it's a good start. |
| Alpha Draconis1 2004-04-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting ACCs but perhaps you should explain more of the setting before going forwards. Or if you're opting for the mystery type, then announce to the readers why you aren't explaining everything right off. |
| Theos Amneos 2004-04-21 ch 1, | abuseHey, me again. This version does read better than the other, but it did help reading that before to understand this one. I'd like to say that the majority of readers here a here because they want to and can appreciate a good literary work, but perhaps the unfamiliarity of the settings and (so far) the characters is why you haven't recieved too many reviews. Please update. The glimpse here leaves me anxiously awaiting more. |
| Aharah Musici 2004-04-18 ch 1, | abuseHmm... This is intresting... |
| Alan Wilkinson 2004-04-18 ch 1, | abuse*chuckle* Good stuff. Wonder what the rest of the world is like. |