Well I just read this all in one sitting. Just wanted to say, you might want to go back and edit it. You have some serious grammer issues. I wouldn't mind doing it for you. But yea, other people could be really rude about it.

*teary eyed* wow...its soo sad...poor thing...loosing him...

You seemed to have really put your soul into this very sweet story. I love Thomas Andrews, yes.

it's a good story, good job on it