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thedawnoflove
2009-11-14 . chapter 18
i love your story
Ryu012692
2009-10-04 . chapter 5
so fluffy!
shadow zombie
2009-08-25 . chapter 51
wow just wow great story my favorite thing is like Inuyasha
Kagome is hanyo ( half-demon ) i'm so looking forward to the rest of the chapters
KARI 22 OF KARI LAND
2009-08-16 . chapter 14
This story is great!
Bluemoon673
2009-07-15 . chapter 51
Well this one is most definetely going on my binded collection. Asome story Dark, tho I wish you would update faster tho. *doesn't like waiting* Plus I can't send it to be printed and binded until it's done...so...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! *pout*
pika995
2009-07-07 . chapter 51
omg this story is so good! i luv it!
Monkeypixie9
2009-07-07 . chapter 31
I'm confused...
me
2009-07-04 . chapter 10
in your little rant at the end the 8 pointed stat is called the star of David
Monkeypixie9
2009-07-04 . chapter 8
um...isn't Rumiko a guy?

You spell Niraku and Shippo wrong I would cheek that...in all of the chapters
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
2009-06-16 . chapter 51
Aw that ending was sweet. Very Genkai like too. Heh I can imagine the whole fic so far. I can also imagine InuYasha's attitude in the last chapter. LOL! I just found this fic yesterday and have been reading it non-stop since midnight. lol! Caffeine does a person wonders. lol. I defintley hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.
Ja matte
Sakura Chang-Maxwell-Yuy
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
Eternity
rachel
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
could you please warn someone next time right away when its a crossover. i was really getting into it until the yu yu hakasho gang was put in the mix and suddenly there was a ton more information and everything started getting jumbled up and.. it was really really amazing.. until the crossover was seriously taking place. angels magic secrets and kagomes extreme personality change from chapter one to chapter 16or whatever. not a flame. not a fan. personally think it wouldve been better if it wasnt a crossover.
Dragon Man 180
2009-05-26 . chapter 51
All this talk of past lives that is suddenly springing up is confusing... but I get there is a demon eating kids' souls that needs to die a most painful death! BUT WHY THE HECK HASN'T SPIRIT WORLD SENT YUSUKE AND HIS TEAM AFTER THE BASTARD ALREADY? If Yusuke was at the level of one of the three demon kings this soul eater would be a cinch for him with back up.
Kani Dectsani
2009-05-21 . chapter 51
Little note: I've read this entire story from Monday to Thursday. IT'S AMAZING! *dies*

I wasn't sure if I was going to like the whole crossover-thing when it first showed up, mainly because Inu and YuYu are my two favorite series. You blended them REALLY well. More originally and quite a bit better than others that I have read.

And now that I've read all the way through, my last comment about the whole "Yusuke would be in demon world!" thing, you times it right, even if it didn't seem like that back in that chapter. I also kep forgetting that they'd be in high school, since in the YuYu Hakusho series, they were in Jr. High. Just one of my oversights, there.

Now that I've caught up, I'll probably try to review every chapter. I love reviewing every chapter, but your story just caught me up and refused to let me go, so now that I have reached what you've written, then I can review to my heart's content!

This section, either this chapter or the next would be great for another story cut. I know you had one earlier, after Naraku's defeat, but this feels like a better one, too. Now that every is back together, in the modern world, you know?

This whole story is one great idea. One thing that I would LOVE to see, would be that when you are done writing the "Boredom Baby" to go back through and touch up the first chapters. NOT rewrite them, but maybe smooth out some rough edges, add some more reactions, Redo some fight scenes ((Although you may not realize this, you've gotten better at them!)), and maybe add a little more with the whole "Inuyasha being royalty" bit. I liked that, but it wasn't fulfilled to my liking.

With the fluffy sections (InuKag, NOT Fluffy (Ses)), you did those amazingly! Realistic, calling to their inu natures, yet still cute without gag, you know?

I do have a request: Could you make a note in which all of the character relations are explained? I have a good idea, but some links can be lost in the cracks. If I'm right, then the only main character that isn't related to this group is Hiei, so he is a little left out, but I think it would be too weird to connect him in. I think we're out of random demon characters, or even human ones, that could have mated with his mother.

*Glances at the HUGE review* Well, I had to make it up sometime. Might as well make one absolutely huge now, and wait until later to go into more detail.

BYE!
~Kani
Queen of the Random Word
2009-05-20 . chapter 51
Neat how things are starting to semi-wrap up, and I'm guessing after they defeat this "Angel soul-eater thing" the fic is going to wind up with a happy ending?
I loved the Yu Yu Hakusho short what accompanied the chapter. Go Kuwabara! *woot*
inufan0915
2009-05-20 . chapter 51
ok the story is great but please take kagome back to the fuedal era with the old guys cause i am confused
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