 Kani Dectsani 2009-05-21 . chapter 51 Little note: I've read this entire story from Monday to Thursday. IT'S AMAZING! *dies*
I wasn't sure if I was going to like the whole crossover-thing when it first showed up, mainly because Inu and YuYu are my two favorite series. You blended them REALLY well. More originally and quite a bit better than others that I have read.
And now that I've read all the way through, my last comment about the whole "Yusuke would be in demon world!" thing, you times it right, even if it didn't seem like that back in that chapter. I also kep forgetting that they'd be in high school, since in the YuYu Hakusho series, they were in Jr. High. Just one of my oversights, there.
Now that I've caught up, I'll probably try to review every chapter. I love reviewing every chapter, but your story just caught me up and refused to let me go, so now that I have reached what you've written, then I can review to my heart's content!
This section, either this chapter or the next would be great for another story cut. I know you had one earlier, after Naraku's defeat, but this feels like a better one, too. Now that every is back together, in the modern world, you know?
This whole story is one great idea. One thing that I would LOVE to see, would be that when you are done writing the "Boredom Baby" to go back through and touch up the first chapters. NOT rewrite them, but maybe smooth out some rough edges, add some more reactions, Redo some fight scenes ((Although you may not realize this, you've gotten better at them!)), and maybe add a little more with the whole "Inuyasha being royalty" bit. I liked that, but it wasn't fulfilled to my liking.
With the fluffy sections (InuKag, NOT Fluffy (Ses)), you did those amazingly! Realistic, calling to their inu natures, yet still cute without gag, you know?
I do have a request: Could you make a note in which all of the character relations are explained? I have a good idea, but some links can be lost in the cracks. If I'm right, then the only main character that isn't related to this group is Hiei, so he is a little left out, but I think it would be too weird to connect him in. I think we're out of random demon characters, or even human ones, that could have mated with his mother.
*Glances at the HUGE review* Well, I had to make it up sometime. Might as well make one absolutely huge now, and wait until later to go into more detail.
BYE!
~Kani |