Amusing.

I discovered this because the title is the same a sa book I was checking in Google search:
It has a captivating quality.

I hope u update soon! PLEASE! This is really really good!

This is more like an angst than a tragedy, but that's really my only criticism! Yea, Janus will be THE MAGUS! THE MAGUS! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!

Keep it going!

oh! this is so funny! and he finally did something 'special'. well, i'm glad that you updated this story and i can't wait for the next chapter so please update again soon!
Karana Belle

^.^ Yay! I've been in the 'beat up little kids and morons mode' (mainly my brother and his friends)Thanks for the gift!

A very good opening. I imagine that would be the way he was welcomed in the the six-hudreth year. He would get the crap beat out of him first. Impressive and fun to read. Good work.

I love this story.I can't wait for the next update.And this story especially goes well when your reading it with Magus' theme song playing.It dosen't matter that you haven't updated in a while.As long as the chapter is long,I think it's perfectly fine.Good luck on the next chapter.

Poor Janus! Stuck in some nasty place with a psycho Flea and a very nasty Slash and Ozzie (enough said on that one, I feel). This is a good fic and I hope you find the time to continue it. I don't think the legend was too odd or random, and I like the way Janus keeps declaring revenge on things! Like rocks! Well anyway, I look forward to an update.

Oh no, I don't think the fourth chapter was bad at all. Good job! Though I will admit that for a moment I wasn't sure if whether or not you were going to continue this story. Thank you for not forsaking it and keep up the good work.

good chapter, will he cast his first spell on slash?

it's ok, I haven't updated any of my work in a while...

good chapter though, he's always cool...

i thought that the chapter was good. really i did! and i can't wait until Janus does his first spell! i hope that it is awesome! and i also liked the legend of 'the Magus' i thought that it was interesting! and it sounded like Magus! can't wait until you update!
Karana Belle

Wow! This is really good! Please finish it!

Very well! This is a very factible explication about Magus' bitterness. But you stile is hard to understand. (Sorry. The english isn´t my primary idiom)

This is VERY interesting. I like it and I think you should continue