That was SO! not fair. I did not expect this ending at all. I hope there is a sequel because i am soo totally reading it. Meanie.

thats just sad poor ash he finally knows what he feels for misty and she dies so very wrong but good story just wish you would stick to a writing style its kinda hard to read with you changing it every chapter

Only one thing.. i'm pretty damn sure this story is classified under romance/humor... that totaly blows my mind.

this story absolutely sucked. I hated it, way too much jumping around. How could you even consider creating a sequel, let alone write it.

i'm really sorry, but i hated it it i looved it till misty shot ash i thot you would make them get back together how could you make them be so far apart they belong together it was good but they should have been together it's not fair how could you do that?

I really didn't like this story. It was really bad. Na dI usually like most stories. I mean, you just don't have the two main characters break up then have one try to kill the other and then one of them dies. That's stupid. You dont fucking mess with true love.

Haha. I always thought Tracey was gay... homo.

niknik i hate you the ending sucks i know iv read this on fanart centril .com and i hate it hate it hate it

its ok so far

well...I'm really not sure on what to say. It's an ending that has dumbfounded me completely. I'll give you credit for proving this tho. You have proven that 'love conquering all' is pure bs! I'm not saying this as a bad thing or a good thing but from the state I'm in it made me feel a lot better for the time being. Only two thing I can really comment on are these. one, When you make a fic you have to keep the dialogue constant or people will get lost in dialogue. Secondly, when you get lazy or feel rushed and make a short chapter you really hurt the story by delaying it or by pushing the plot ahead forcibly. A little more detail before the 5 year jump would've fixed this. Overall this wasn't that bad of a fic and I'll immediately look at your sequel. Keep it up ^_^

great fic!
I LOVED IT! ^_^

i really love this fic! it is by far one of the best i have ever read! please write more fics! i am your #1 fan!

i loved your story. i'm a big pokemon fan. i'm actually working on a pokemon story now. it wont b posted until its completely done. look 4 it under the name aaml4evr. i'm goin' 2 call it The Love Between Two Trainers. b sure 2 look 4 it. all my friends say its really good so far. keep on writing those stories. your a great author.

I think I speak for everyone when I say...
SEQUEL!

I thought the last chapter was the end. glad it wasn't though. I realy hope you contiue with your stories.

P.S. Thank you for reading and reviewing my first fic. If anyone is interested you can go read "Keeping Memories"

as always...

Write from the Heart

Then maybe I missed it. Whatever. ¬_¬

Sad ending at first, but turned slightly better. Overall, nice job. Later!