 Biscuit 2004-04-21 . chapter 1 aw! this would be great if it was made into a series...i love b/a *great to know they still love each other* and the b/s friendship in season 7 of buffy was actually beautiful (even tho am against them as a couple...b/a forever!)...especially when spike just held buffy in his arms during the night when she was kicked out by dawn and everyone. also love the parallel with "city of" with the phone thing at the end. would be great if you could continue this, if not, it gives hope to b/a shippers that their love is still strong! (i know, very corny and sappy, but it's true!) |
 Hill-Bill 2004-04-18 . chapter 1wow.. that was great! Short 'n sweet but leaves room 4 more (but if ya aren't gonna add more, it's still good). i wouldn't change anything except for the wording of this line "Spike was thinking similar thoughts to Angel," yeah, kinda akward... but besides that, this is a awesome fic! |