 Dragon of Twilight 2008-11-06 . chapter 17i'm really starting to get attached to Myra. she'll do anything for her friends, and it think that it's really awesome how she took all that harassment just to get information. i'm rooting for her! ^.^
please update sometime soon. |
 WishingWanderer 2008-08-22 . chapter 17I love this story. I hope you can write more soon. You are very good. |
 perfect-pisces 2008-07-20 . chapter 17PLease update soon. I love the story so far. ^_^ |
 luna's (the moon) lady-love 2008-07-07 . chapter 17Woot! I loved it (of course)! Congratulations on your wedding and honeymoon! |
 Animefreak11 2008-06-15 . chapter 17YAY! An update!! ^_^ It's been so long... but no worries! I'm happy, not mad! I just finished my first year of college too, and I haven't updated my stories in ages as well ;-; It makes me sad... But wow! You're getting married!? Congrats! ^_^ And awesome chapter =D |
 Kage Fuschichou 2008-06-11 . chapter 17please please please keep on updating this story. it is very well written and i love the character development and plot line. thanks XD |
 Yorukifon 2008-06-07 . chapter 17 Oh, so, very interesting. Please update soon. It's really awesome, seriously! You better update because I expect to be able to read more of this wickedly awesome story. |
 TheDemonQueen1 2008-05-28 . chapter 17OMG poor Myra. I would be sick too after that. I really liked how you did it though hun. I hope they will be able to figure out what the demons were talking about. I mean they weren't coherent, so their answers didn't exactly make a lot of sense. She was good though. I was definatly impressed with her ability to hold her own. I bet Hiei followed her deliberatly though. That sounds like him. Going with her to make sure she is not only okay but that she doesn't mess up. Great chapter sweetie. Can't wait to talk to you again. Love you tons! Ja ne! |
 Baka Hanyou Raevyn 2008-05-24 . chapter 17Really good chapter. I love how Hiei can't resist her. I would have freaked out after the first touch, though.
Congrats on getting married! |
 White Fire Phoenix 2007-12-22 . chapter 16I like your story. I hope you update soon. |
 The Angel of the Night 2007-08-15 . chapter 16Please hurry with the next one I wanna find out what happens.T.T And by the way I love your story. If you want an idea or something you just have to ask and I can give you some.
~Ja ne~ ^o^*peace sign*
~The Angel of the Night~
P.S. Keep up the good work!! ;D |
 Aries Zodiac 2007-08-05 . chapter 16Interesting fic. I have to say I like it quite a lot and I really did not expect to, mainly from your summery.
Once I started actually ereading the story, I admit, I really got into it. I know nothing about Yu Yu Hakusho, so that you held me for 16 chapters was good going! :)
I like Myra. I think she's an interesting character. And, someone, despite..well..(Ok, if you ran her through a Mary Sue test, you'd score a fair few points)...BUT despite this, she's a rare should-be-a-screaming-MS-who-actually-isn't. *applauds* I have to admit, I've never seen anyone take so many cliches and turn them into a really good character.
So..heh..I'm impressed!
I like your writing style. It flows well, it's humourous and serious in fairly equal parts, well-balanced and entertaining.
My one gripe would be how much her previous physical and mental abuse is shoved down our throats. Yes, she has been horribly treated...but it is rather a litany.
And if someone was stabbed in the gut badly enough that their womb was destroyed..they'd be dead. Three days? Forget infection, she'd have haemorraged out within an hour.
Anyway, despite my rather ruthless picking apart of what I did not like, I did very much enjoy this story and would like to read more of it! |
 luna's (the moon) lady-love 2007-04-11 . chapter 16Do you ever hear the scary climactic music from a movie playing in your head as you read something? That is what I am getting right now. I like it, and I sort of understand her forgetting about pain because I do that too when I am working out. Update more please and I promise to R&R sooner too. |
 FoxLuvr 2007-02-06 . chapter 16I wasn't sure if I was going to like this story, but now I love it! I can't wait till you update it again! :) And I just want to know, have you read all the Tamora Pierce books? I know you've read the 'Wild Magic' ones, but have you read any others? |
 fangimation 2007-01-27 . chapter 16O.O Chew-whoo!
Wow, thats one way to end a chapter...i wonder what happened to Yukina, and if the guys would be able to deal with this...seesh.
Continue!! |