awesome story are you going to do any more chapters

Nice story. Two freakishly large thumbs up! You need to learn a bit more about paragraph structure, but the story is interesting and well written.

Cool fic. I'll read the rest later.

Yay! Another chapter! I really like this one, but why the evil cliffhanger? Oh well, sometimes cliffhangers are good, since now I really want to read the next chapter.

WHAT HAPPENS? Tell me! GAH!

Sorry, I just hate cliff hangers. Good chapter.

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I like this story a lot, but I suggest you make a space whenever a new person is talking.

Though I have one question, will Shauni and Kyle be a couple?

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Great story, I'm definatly putting this on my favorites! Can't wait until you update it again..

Men in black suits...reminds me of the school dance last year..Anywho, this was probably the best chapter yet, do continue.

Okay, apparently you're on a roll...but please, do continue...other wise I'll have my penguin mafia stop by...

Interesting...very interesting...

Greetings from the planet Grounded...well, this is a pretty good chapter...can't say anything bad about it (this story) yet...keep it up!

Very good...yes, very good indeed...-strokes chin thoughtfully- Tell me, did you ever consider making movies?

Pretty good...my uncle's a mechanical engineer...and I'm an idiot! Anywho, keep it up!

Whoa...figured something like this would happen, but wasn't sure. Anywho,keep up the good work!

Okay, either you enjoy making cliff hangers or it couldn't be helped...in any case, please continue!