haha! I haven't read this fanfic in forever! XP
LOL. Anyways. Uh... I look forward to an update! But don't worry about updating right away. I'm kind of doing the same thing with one of my fanfics... *sweatdrop*
THE DAILY SHOW RULESS!

THIS IS GREAT!!



I'm mean, it's teh best, really. The best Aurikku EVER!

Man, you GOTTA finish this. I mean, this changed my life, y'know? Really!


Hey, you will finish it, right? I mean, "pretty please", y'know!

We need it, ya!!

Aw, it's so sad. But very great story!! I'm looking forward to more! They are just so cute together...

"He was the one who could get claustrophobic with just one other person in an entire blitzball stadium..."

That is probably the best description of Auron's personal bubble I have ever read. Well done! ^_^

hey! i've been seeing this story in the list for some time now, and i was thinking about opening it since its an Aurikku, when i was reading the first lines i was like: 'Pilgrimage again?', so i returned to the main page, a few nights i went by and i got back to FFX section and decided to open it and read it, and 'woulda you know i was clobbering my head to the wall after readng chapter one--lol...i'm so stupid

its already 2:08 in the morning and i just wanted to say GOOD WORK!!i love how you write about the characters, full of fluff!!*my tummy's fill with bunnies* er...bunnies?

anyway, its official: i'll be reading this story next! but seeing its really late and i should get my ** to bed, i think i'll read chapter 2 and the rest of it tomorrow.

Again KUDOS!

Poor Rikku, it's so hard to smile when you feel your heart breaking and even harder to accept the fact that you're best friend who's practically family to you is going to die, an irreversable fact that is accentuated by a dying city in a dying world. This another good chapter and I'm glad that you updated. I understand how life goes: it sucks and what have you. I hope to see more, soon! ^_^

[Goes to record those shows!]

Wow. Why haven't I seen this before? Looks pretty good so far. I'm going to have to keep reading. ;) Not much to say that you probably already haven't heard. I'll keep it short, then: Loverly. Me like. I shall be watching, and reading the rest in between updates. ;)

I skipped ahead to your author's notes in the final chapter, and I'm probably going to set myself up for spoilers doing that someday, but can I suggest something? If writing seems jumpy/choppy and you know that you can prevent it by writing it a different way, then most people would rather that you write it in a different way than sacrifice the quality of the story for it.

I'm going off of personal experience, though I am just a lowly high-schooler and know not what I do. I should in all likelihood be ignored. ;) Cheers.

~Ren (Fwe)

Whoa...that was hot O_o

Holy snap! You watch Strangers With Candy too?!?!?!?!? I have the complete season and I watch The Colbert Report every day!! I've been in love with Stephen Colbert for years! Glad to find somebody who watches the same stuff!

It's really not too bad, but you can tell that it is rushed a bit a choppy at that - just as you said. It's an interesting continuation, but emotions were changing far too quickly - like Rikku going from venomous to all pleading... I know you are trying to keep up with your old style of writing, but it's a little bleh.

I am glad that you are continuing it, though.

Chibi

you stopped writting T_T... that saddens me... I started readin your fanfic about 2 years ago i think... and I just checked it out again. I was curious on if it progressed any lol. I guess not. too bad too. It was a really good one.

Nice work =)

Kill Bill Vol. 1 when Elle was talking to Bud while he was dieing. Great movie.

'Come on where the rest of the story!! I have to get up tommorow at 8 AM but here i am 1:30 in the morining becaue your fic is so great! I cant belive i have to go to sleep not knowing whats going to happen!!

Pllease write more you are so fabulose. The battles are just long enough to keep my attention and fuzzie sences are just the right space apart!! Not to mention how well you keep everyone in character.

I love how you are keeping it real but i think id love it more to see you make the ending your own, even if that means re-vamping the whole Defeating Sin Problem!
PLease write more! :<

AH! UPDATE!

gr... i can't understand al bhed! never got that far in the game. so i've missed out on all the really good conversations in this story!