|Reviews for Children of the Night|
| Dreigon 4/23/04 . chapter 3
Now my doubt is gone. Thanks for the information about who's reading.
*-* Malik was wainting! -_-U Why Ryo don't talk? I read, that his eyes tell everything, but, can he speak some words? Can I ask you a question?
Will be a lemmon here or something like that?
I like lemmon, but if you don'r want to write...Do not do it.
I love this ficcy!
CONTINUE! THIS IS BURNING!
| Jou 4/22/04 . chapter 2
Jou: O_O; Ok, Killer. Where's the box? Killer: Hold it! It's here somewhere! *rumages through things* Box of pain, box of insanity, box of chibis, Hey, I've been searching for that. Box of chaos, box of develish ideas, box of destruction, Ah here we are. * holds box of inspiration while grinning* Jou: O_O; Killer: Revenge of the chibis! Ahem... This involves me. *runs* Jou: O_O; uh oh...
| Stars in a Shoebox 4/21/04 . chapter 2
That is so cool! I liked the way you described Ryou! I like 'KuraxRyou pairings!
| Me-O-Tojite 4/21/04 . chapter 2
Wow this is good. Keep writing. This is very beautifully written, and very ineresting to read.
| The Wanderer-Chan 4/21/04 . chapter 2
Woow...great! . *lovesh Vampires* And yes, I noticed ALOT of Anne Rice in there. XD It made it better, tho! I'm reading the series right now (I'm now on Queen of the Damned), and I saw lots of stuff from The Vampire Lestat.
But it was wonderful! One of the best YGO Vampire fics out there! Really!
| Hidden Dreams 4/21/04 . chapter 2
coolieo ryou sounds awesome
| physco 4/21/04 . chapter 1
HELP! I'm sorry for using your review but i'm in desperate need of all you fabfiction fans out there. I can't find this really good fanfiction and it doesn't help that i cant remember what its called.
Marik is evil and rapes Ryou. They go on a boat holiday thingy where Ryou realises that Marik really loves watch a film and there's yaoi. Later on Seto hits on Ryou and sexually assults him. Ryou goes home crying where Bakura tries to talk to him. Marik eventually gets it out of Ryou and they are lovers again.
Please help me find this fanfcition as it is one of my favourites:) Contact me at
i love your fanficiotn so far.:D
| Osiris-Lee 4/20/04 . chapter 2
Ah, spring break. A wonderful invention. In regarding the celts, not all celts were druids. The druids were the celt's priests, the celts themselves were the people. Did that make any sence? ...probably not. Anyway! Liking the storyline, as usual, but i think maybe a bit more feelings? Erm...how to explain. Ryou seemed to accept things awfully quickly, and you don't go into detail with their realationship and things...though i liked the description of their love. But if you're starting a present time story after the past then this is fine...I really don't think i'm making sence, but oh well.
In short, love it. Keep it up and enjoy your spring break!
| fatal petal 4/20/04 . chapter 2
Ah, fine chapter. Very nice descriptions. I could almost, well, "feel" the exact moment happening. ( however cheesy that sounded, it's true! ) The one with Celtic!Ryou dancing was sort of familiar... ( I think there was a Celt in Anne Rice's books as well, can't remember who, though... )
Anyway, I so thoroughly love the way you decribed the vampires' love for each other. Perfect and all too subtle B/R fluff. _ Can't wait for the fluff, actually. I crave for fluff... * foams at the mouth *
By the way, you are so fast in updating that you make my head spin! How DO you do that? * takes notes *
Update soon! Take care! Catch! * throws singing Ryuichi plushie * _v
| Dreigon 4/20/04 . chapter 2
I love your fics! Continue this history!
Oh yes, Who is reading? Me or me as another lector in the fic?
| Chelsea 4/20/04 . chapter 2
Druids were Celtic priests and priestesses. The Celts had a very widespread and rich civilization as well. It spread quite a distance. Druids generally held oak trees as sacred, and had many rituals and practices that modern humans would find repulsive.
Interesting story. Not sure on the characterization, but it's still a well done story.
| thomas jefferson is my homeboy 4/19/04 . chapter 1
Shaoling: *waves rapidly* eek! sugoi! you started anew fic! *throws leftover confetti* and it's a _vampire_ fic! *starry eyes* I love those!
Kharue: ... *whacks her on the head with a soup pot* SHUT UP!
Shaoling: O_O *gasp* yami! You're not all uke anymore!
Kharue: ...I'd rather not talk about that.
Shaoling: *through megaphone* HEY, MINNA-SAN! YAMI NO KHARUE WAS TEMPORARILY UKE!
Kharue: *twitch* Why! I'm not _really_ a bad person...I don't run arund with knives most of the time like most yamis (or Malik)! SO WHY! Why am I stuck with a hikari who is out to ruin my reputation!
Nanashi: Isis-san said that it was fate.
Shaoling: *jumps* where'd you come from*
Kharue: ...doesn't matter. *jumps Nanashi*
Shaoling: ...O.o;; um...let's move to another subject. *walks out of room* ahem. *squeal* you like Gravitation too! Do you have the manga? I do! Numbers one to four, and I'm trying to get five! Isn't Shuichi KAWAII! And the pink hair! And you're right. Yuki really _is_ like Kaiba-san! Ryuichi is kawaii too! And Hiro is col! *coughs* anou sa...*looks up and rambling* I'm on a sugar-low. Really. This is how I act when I don't have sugar. ;; kinda makes you wonder, eh? We-e-e-e-ell...back to the review... I love it. I luff you! A vampire fic! WAI! That first part is really the sort of thing that catches your eyes, just kind of wills you to read on. Or as a yami would say "or else". Continue? Update? *throws Shuichi plushie* _ I know. A different anime, but I'm sleepy. Kah. Oyasumi or whatever time it is where you are...*falls asleep on keyboard* ja...
| Stars in a Shoebox 4/19/04 . chapter 1
It's either Malik or Marik. Wait. Is there a difference? Oh well. This story is soo cool! I love B/R story and the vampire part makees it more interesting. -
| Last of the Shadows 4/19/04 . chapter 1
Author-I like the story, it's strange, but I like it
Bakura- You are wrong on several counts, one, I am not a mortal, I am a shadow youkai, two, I know that you are a good theif, but I am the ultimate bandit, three, your hair seems more white than silver to me and four, well, I cant think of a fourth one, but I enjoyed 'life story' as a ningen
Sincerely, or perhaps not,
Last of the Shadows
| Ryuujitsu 4/19/04 . chapter 1
*wipes brow* Phew! It's really hot here in PA, but your new story has chills running down my back!
Em. Maybe not really, but that is the general feeling! ;;
Is it Malik or Mariku? Hm. I doth wonder...but Malik kissing Bakura like a mother (and with no passion at all) seems like a scary thing to me. . I do like your description of death. It's not quite tramatic or just "blah," nor does he see angels beckoning-it happens. It helps with Bakura's character, I think...it makes him kind of detached, and yet he's still baring this all to you at the same time.
It's good to know they're immune to the usual methods. They can't die ever, right? ;_; The angst is frightening! Meep!
Have you ever read Children of the Night, by Mercedes Lackey? (Featuring sexy French Vamp. Andre LeBrel!) The paragraph about drinking blood being "better than sex" (*sweatdrop*) reminds me of it.
Ryou being a cold killer seems...a little off. I'd think he be feeling at least a bit of guilt...or will we see that later? ;; Turmoil! *gasp*
And this is based off...Interview with a Vampire? You do know that it states within fanfiction guidelines that Anne Rice is not to be modeled after, or had fanfiction from? ;; Please be careful! This story sounds good so far and I don't want to see it taken off!
All-in-all, awesome! Please update soon, but take your time and keep the quality good like it always is...I see that you are working on two stories now instead of just one!
Ryuujitsu & co.
PS: TVITC should be coming out by mid-July. ;; I'm slow this year due to schoolwork and summer things. TVITC's a completely different take from this one...very lighthearted, all fun-and-games, potholes-like. It gets deeper...eventually. I guess you could say it's kinda like Trigun.