it was great

very cute

Awsome story! I've read your other stories too! I love them! ur a kool author. ;D (I added u to my fav. authors list.)

rly nice story...short and sweet..

hey i loved your fanfiction it was really good i thought i8t was really sweet. i thought it was really funny to about inuyasha and kagome that was funny because everybody thinks inuyasha never waits lolol

Very good but if they both only had crushes on one another (i.e. your story)then you should have them slowly get to this stage. You dove into the relationship a little to fast for my taste.