   MarineFlyer86 2008-09-17 . chapter 1i think you mean carolyn Imes but i love the story great job |
 starryeyes10 2008-06-08 . chapter 8great story |
| swimERfanatic13 2008-06-05 . chapter 8 Great!! I loved it! |
 Beach chick 2004-12-22 . chapter 8That was so good! I can't believe its over. Oh well...it was very good! |
| jagdreamer 2004-12-22 . chapter 8 Oh my god! AWESOME story! Like I said before, "The Bet" and "The Road Not Taken" are my favorite stories!! I hope you make more stories, they're so awesome. You're only 16, and you're by far my favorite writer. Now if only some of your stories came true...;) |
| Jowaco 2004-12-21 . chapter 8 Hey, Hey...I'm 16 and I watch JAG so ha ha ha! anyway! Loved the story, but if you ask me the end was too sudden! But i still really liked it! |
| Beach chick 2004-12-21 . chapter 7 Love absolutly loved that chapter. It was really good. Love the Mac punching her in the face. Priceless! |
| ashnic6289 2004-12-20 . chapter 7 Hehehe. Go Mac. :) |
| Jowaco 2004-12-20 . chapter 7 Hey, nice!! I like the last sentence that seems like something Mac would do, if ever in that situation! UPdate soon! |
| Beach chick 2004-12-20 . chapter 6 I just finished reading your newest chapter and it was great. Things are starting to get very interesting.
Your 16 and like to watch JAG too? Here I thought that I was the only 16 year old that likes to watch JAG and write fanfiction. That's very cool.lol
Please continue soon. |
| Beach chick 2004-12-20 . chapter 5 Can't wait to read more. This chapter was great! |
| Beach chick 2004-12-20 . chapter 1 I only just started reading this, and it's really good. Can't wait to read more! |
| hothing40 2004-12-20 . chapter 6 Please make more chapters please please! |
| ashnic6289 2004-12-19 . chapter 6 Please, please, please continue and very soon. :) |
| jagdreamer 2004-12-19 . chapter 6 Oh my god, if you're stopping it there, I think we're all gonna shoot you! You HAVE to continue! |
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