 solojones 2006-08-13 . chapter 3Another fantastic story from you. You're quickly becoming one of my favourite authors for 24 stories. Not only do you have a great sense of the characters, but also a great sense of style. Not just in a 'hey, I can write complete sentences' way but in such a way that your writing style sets a tone, a mood, and contributes greatly to the effectiveness of the story. These vignettes were all fantastic. |
 Breakwater 2006-02-16 . chapter 3This is my favourite fic EVER! |
 susie 2004-04-21 . chapter 1 Amazing story, you really described the characters' inner struggles well. Please write somemore 24 fan fiction |
 Christina Miller (too lazy to log in) 2004-04-20 . chapter 2 A-HA! So there IS a lovely and gracious Mrs. Chappelle. I've always been curious about her. This is a wonderful story. Whose POV will the third vignette be written in? |
 Meg Randolf 2004-04-19 . chapter 2 Great. I love it. I like the end the best. That is just gripping. I feel sorry for the man I had just cheered for dying the other night. Great job. I hope you write more fics like this soon. |
 mandi 2004-04-19 . chapter 1 Brilliant! |
 Christina Miller (too lazy to log in) 2004-04-19 . chapter 1 Cool fic! I always wondered about Mrs. Chappelle too. Ryan does wear a ring. I'm surprised he didn't want to call her. |