Um, for some reason your hp fic stops half way through a sentence. I mention it here because it won't let me review there. Care to explain? I was really getting into that story and then poof! Nada.
Email me please because I really want to know the ending.

lol I just found this story and read it all and you are right. I do want to know what Alec's reaction is more than what's wrong with Zane. Is that bad? Well all I wanna know is how the Alec/Lou thing will go after this chapter. I hope it still works. Well anyway update soon!

P.S. You are an awesome writer and I have no idea how in the hell you come up with this stuff! I feel like I am reading a novel by some famous author or somethin lol.

I have never been into a fanfiction as I was this one. It was perfectly written and it was like I was watching it on tv. There were times where I was bursting out laughing and I could see what was going on in my head. And even so, its almost like Lou and some of the other made up characters were as real as Max was. It was incredibly done and is currently in my favorites. I hope that you write more soon and keep me informed. Thanks for the awesome read.

I'm glad to see you updated. It's such a good story, and I love getting to read it before everyone else. But that's the perk of being the beta right? Hope you had a good holiday.And I know everyone will love the chapter.

~Beta babe, Rose

Well... since you begged. I'll review. Great story! (hope this is some inspiration) Really glad I found it. Say... Any chance you gonna bring Sam (X5-453) in? I love her! (and of course this will be a favorite considering there aren't many Sam fics out there)

He, he you're still writing. And after all this time I wondered *IF* there would ever be another chapter, I've almost missed your update. Isn't it ironic ;-)...? (love the song!)

I liked this line:
...--“I feel like I’m in the middle of bad horror movie. Isn’t this starting to look so much like a cliché? A car breaks down, a couple looks for help and only finds -- Max, what’s wrong?”

Your descriptions of the house and the old lady are great and this Callaway guy really gave me the creeps (nice idea to create an equal opponent for Lydecker).

I hope your next update won't take a year (please!).
THANKS.

nice job. likeing the joshua and lydecker scenes.. interesting about ames gran- i think there may have been a better way to introduce her- like she owned a gas station or something... well done. tho. massive chapter. good articulation and spacing. nice use of language.

BR

Okay, I took your advice and read the story from the beginning and I do like the other characters. I enjoy Max and Logan the best because they were the stars of Dark Angel, the show I loved.

Just sitting around waiting for another chapter.

Excellent chapter!
Loved the Max/Logan interaction at the beginning and the conversation between Logan and good old Deck.

The `Gonzales-mission` taking place at a salsa night club - cool idea! I liked that.
You had me laughing about Alec (poor boy) and feeling for Noah, having to deal with Mr Dirtbag Gonzales (arghh).

Keep up the great work and thanks for the fast update.

Lol deck and joshua in a car! hee! this is going good. liked the mission, especially liked the salsa dancing. and rebuen was a reallu interesting character. awesome job!

update its really good so far!

update! update! update! update!
ur stories brilliant! cant wait for nxt chapter (literally!)

Even though i've only read the first three chapters i realli like your ideas and the way your putting them out...i guess if season three was being made i wouldn't mind it being something along the lines of this story...

I´m really enjoying your story and you compansated the lack of action with long awaited Max/Logan stuff. (so cute, *sigh*)
The `dramatic` interaction between Alec, Lou, Noah and Zack had me cracking up laughing. So I didn`t miss the action this much.

loved this part:
...Besides, who had ever proven that it really had been curiosity that’d killed the cat? I mean, he could’ve been poisoned or something? Lou told herself. Or maybe he met a bigger cat? Or maybe he just bailed with a female? (LOL)

I think I`ve done my `encouragement job` pretty good, right? LOL
Please update soon! I know pathience is a virtue, ... (that I don`t have). ;)
Thanks for sharing.

Hey it's your beta babe, read this chapter again for kicks and have to say it's so good. I'll get on the next chapter as soon as I can. Christmas Break is just around the corner so I'll have plenty of time to do it then. ;)
~Rose