No continuation? i liked it, not lame but good and funny.

It was funny though the drowning part did make me nervous. I like the part where Oishi calls Kikumaru a "spoiled child." I agree that he is spoiled. I wish Kawamura could ahve gone with them. I wonder what he would say about what they were doing. Good job with the characters!

It's not bad. Quite cute. But I had some problems with the language. What is "ceh"? And it is better to put down the translations since not all people understand Japanese. It would be nice if you add in more descriptions and made the fic more complete. ^^ Hope this will be of help.

This one is better than the Unforgettable Gift, but still, the characters are OOC, especially Tezuka. Sorry, I have no time so I make it into a review only.

Tezuka is OOC, both in this one, and in Unforgettable Gift, but he's more OOC in the Unforgettable Gift.

Fuji is more in character in this one. Good job.

Well... that's all I think... I'll send the other comments through SMS later

bagus!! bagus!! ^^

Sdkt tambahan, Tezu n Ryo agak OOC soalnya mereka itu (terutama Tezu) biasanya cuma ngomong klo terpaksa ^^;

Endingnya juga agak ngegantung(mnrt g), mungkin bisa ditambah lagi sebelum owari, k?

Ganbatte!! \(^o^)/

Hm My First Thouhgt is Funny LOL huauahuahuau But I Think These was great Keep Up ya! (Esp. The CPR And The Blushing Scene huahuahuahuahu XDD)

OMG...Yaoi story again... Ravient...You're really like Yaoi aren't u? OMG... I can't imagine the things taht Seigaku member did in their OWN room that night... OMG... WAht the?? But Basically You're writting skill got better! The grammar is getting better...wow amazing...

HOAI!VINA SENPAI!!I LOVe...Ur StOrY!ThiS OnE Is THe bEst SO fAr...!HAHA...I's CuTeZ n ThErE'S nOtHin' WroNG WiTH it. The WaY u BuILd the IdeA n DeliVereD it is PrETTy Well AlsO. WELL DONE!XD
raTE= 8/10.
KEEp up ur gUd work!

ok laa... ku review d. actually i got nuthing 2 say since i'm ur beta reader. ^^ but... it's nice!keep writing! heehee ^^