I just finished your story and it was so great. You have an amazing talent!

I JUST READ THE WHOLE THING AND I LUVED IT!

This is a good story, and i think that the story line is very interesting. However, I'm on the second chapter, and I just cannot read it. hte spacing is so close together that i keep on skipping over lines and even paragraphs. Maybe you change it later in the story, but for now, I can't read it.

Aw it was so sad when Joshua died!!
And when Grandmere died!! It was cool being able to see her diaries and her love for someone not royal. It was a really sad story with a happy ending!! Gunna read your other stories now! :)

No! No! No! And um...NO! You can't kill off Joshua. He's a decent guy. He loves Mia. It's obvious that she loves Micheal because she wasn't willing to tell Josh that she'd already lost her virginity to someone else, but... I respect Josh for being a good person. There aren't enough guys out there who are good people. HOW DARE YOU KILL ONE OF THEM?!

That line that Josh says, the one about needing to see a man about a horse, that was in a movie. Which movie was it? This is my way of saying your story kicks ** so far, but I'm afraid I'm gonna hate Micheal for taking Mia away from this Josh guy. Mia's Josh seems genuinely in love with her. Micheal should not be ruining it.

screw jashawa go hansolo

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I know you posted this chapter a really long time ago, but I agree with you, the Yanees totally suck! I'm still mad because they beat the Mariners a couple years ago in the playoffs when the Mariners had the best team in AL history or something. Grr...stupid Yankees.

thats beautiful! i love it! please keep on writing!

You're story is really amazing. You're a great writer. You're way of thinking is so different, there's not another story like that out there. Keep up the creativity! :-D

So, yah. im the one who reviewed for jesse's girl ya no? if you read back to it, heck if you read to this. anywho (u can probable tell i like that word!) This was a really good story cute and all! I thought it was sad when josuha died. but you made kit work. like when someone has a realy ugly shirt but it looke cute on them and only them? Only you could make this story work, k so u might get POed when people review randomly to say u done urself goodbut i was obliged to after that long review to jesse's girl! wow this was supposed to be a short review!! I never run out of things to say! yah wow zip i thought more emotion would be stirred up with the whole Iceland thing. like "almost going there with Josh (i no he liked his full name but i cant really spell it so i had to do him some justic by saying this) Ya no i would get a pink lizard tatoo on my foot but my mom would tfo(totaly flip out with a zilion !'s) sorry i write a lot, way more then planed. Heck no one even reads the long reviews. sept maybe me. and my insane clown possie (lanna that means you **keep the sun in the sky~~

That was the best story i have read! You should do a sequel girl! I was really moved and touched by the story... i was like in a rollercoaster. There were this sad moments (That I like) and happy moments (which i love) that really goes together... please do a sequel... please... please...

U have to do a sequel! I want to know what happens to them! Any kids?

PLEASE DO A SEQUEL! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

Is that enough persuasion??

i loved your fic, thanks for the enjoyment.

i don't follow baseball being a Brit, but ive always secretly liked the Red Sox. i only know about 4 teams but i just thought they had the coolest name. lol. coz i couldnt choose on ability as i don't even know the rules!

Thanks again.

just for the record i support Arsenal- a english footie team, and Bath rugby team! :D

love tezbuzz

Aw that was an awesome story