Aw, I loved this. It was so sweet and it made me remember the game all over again -- good times.^^

Personally, I think he's just a quick lerner; that Riona /really/ taught him how to dance in five minutes. :) Then again, I love fics in which he only lies about his 'inability'.

Very nice story. I enjoyed it a lot.

you kind've forgot the part near the ending where
they come close togther and ...
ah who cares?

Wow. That was intense there at the end.

I like this! You wrote exactly how I felt Squall must have felt. It's awesome! Really nicely written. I really wish you could write one for the ending as well. The rescue in the middle of the game too! I'm sure you'll do great! I'll keep an eye for yuor work!