I thought this was slightly humorous...I guess you'll have to find this funny, if you approached a "loner" before. :/

frog pornography, lol.
liked the ending alot.

Wow. The both of them were perfectly captured. Completely different, but somehow able to converse. And everything Orochimaru says, knowing what happens to him later...it's a little creepy. But it makes it completely plausible. Bravo.

"Not all snakes crawl belly-down."
...really and what snake would that be!...orochimaru?...but this does kinda makes sence it would explain allot if it was part of the show! good job on it!!..but seriously what sanke doesnt!?!!^_^!...

This is amazing!! I love the connection between the snake cast off and Orochimaru's technique. It's so true!
I'm faving this. It's something I want to be able to read whenever I feel like a good story.

i liked it

So cute.

Perfect. This fic is absolute perfection.

:)

A friend of mine told me that this was a good fic, and it actually was! :)

loved it

One of my positive favorites! It was very, very funny. I love the way you portrayed Jiraiya. He was quite in-character.

Wow... Like... Wow!~ I really love this fanfic to death. Hardcore I love this thing. The ending is just too perfect. (I screamed when I finished reading this, and I was at school. x3 I just had to read it aloud too. It was too good.

Frog porn? *Dies laughing* Oh that was sweet. Excellent, how showed their interests in the animal of their summons

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Great characterization, an the interaction between Orochimaru and Jiraiya is really well-handled. I liked the references to their summons, as well. That, and the "frog pronography" line was priceless. XD