Hahaha...

Beautiful dive there you two...seem to have penchant for cliffs, and jumping. Good thing you had a little practice before Thangorodrim.

Lovely...

Hey! Nice story! Thanks for reviewing mine! :) If you like LOTR, you might like my 2 Gollum stories..."Cave of Gollum" and "Crushing Hands." A bit dark, but...

Darling. I like your fic, even though I have no idea what is going on. The description is good, but I think that you need to expand on what is going on a bit more. Keep writing and see how it goes.
Love Liz

Interestingly enough, this is the second fic I've read recently that was based on that very picture by Jenny Dolfen. Strange coincidence, no? I guess it's a trend.

This one is very different in tone and content from the other. I like Maedhros at the end with the fistful of sand. Good.

The only criticism I have is that you didn't show Fingon's concern, his dread, actually, enough to really make the reader feel for him. Other than that, very nice work!