   Hollabackgurl029 2005-07-27 . chapter 1very kawaii! keep writing! |
 L.G.K.O 2004-10-08 . chapter 1it ok |
 readingfreak742 2004-08-08 . chapter 1i like it, i really want more of this fic! |
| Katina 2004-07-14 . chapter 1 O__O...ok then um i hope thare is more because i dont under stand realy i dont, why was he sweating and what song inspiered you to write a bout a rape tell me i'v heard songs a bout murder and sex but rape?!?!?! fill me in plz |
| inuyashatotallyobsessed 2004-06-02 . chapter 1 i have one word for you MORE! oops, i ment more please!! |
| remix-69er 2004-04-28 . chapter 1 OK...THAT WAS MY FAVORITE OUT OF ALL UR ONE-SHOTS...IT WAS SO GOD!LOVED IT!! |
| LemonAngel-Remanisa 2004-04-19 . chapter 1 Good start! Update it soon! |
| pink twilight 2004-04-19 . chapter 1 i like it , u should keep it going!! |
 Chibi Horsewoman 2004-04-19 . chapter 1Another chapter would be much appreciated by this pregnant lady. I want to know what happens next. That is if anything happens next. |
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