|Reviews for End of the Dreams|
| allitersonance 12/4/05 . chapter 8
Not the best grammar, but it's pretty good still. I think most people have Harry's Aunt Petunia care about him before his Uncle Vernon, but it's a nice twist. And Harry's trying to die, even though he thinks it's just sleep... haha. 8/10
| Seni-x 12/4/05 . chapter 8
OMG! Is he dead now? He can't be dead! You can't let him die!
Great story! love it! Continue ASAP, pls
Why isn't the Order there yet? Cause it's at the end of book 5 right of not? Is it after the 6th book or ... Please verify that, or else it's a bit confusing about the time-line we're in.
Oh yeah, poor Lily! I don't really think that's possible in the books (that bad at least) but maybe a tiny bit of it is.. I don't know...
| kikyohater404 9/14/04 . chapter 7
Petunia is such an evil witch!But good story
| Joslin 8/22/04 . chapter 7
Oh NO.. poor harry. what's going to happen? Plz update soon!
| chips challenge 8/19/04 . chapter 7
Oh no, I hope Harry gets some help from somewhere. He's obviously not going to get any from his family or maybe Vernon will call someone. ) Maybe Professor Snape )
| chips challenge 8/19/04 . chapter 6
That was interesting hearing so much from Petunia's point of view. It's a view we don't usually see a lot of in fan fiction. I was amused especially when she was thinking that Dudley could be any size she wanted him to be :)
I had a hard time reading some of it just because there aren't many spaces. My eyes get tired reading large paragraphs. The English looks great. I got somewhat confused with the previous chapter.
I'm off to read your next chapter.
| kokomocalifornia 8/19/04 . chapter 7
really good update!
the order have to come save him now!
| Harry Potter -Dreamer 8/18/04 . chapter 3
Hey I read three chapters of this, it was a really good idea and quite a good fic, with plenty of xcitement. However it's not really the normal type of fanfic I would go for, that is the only reason I did not read it to the end. However I believe you should always reveiw. So Keep writing and good Luck :)
| Ainsley Haynes 8/18/04 . chapter 6
Hi! I've been reading your story since the day you published the first chapter and I thought it would be nice if I drop these lines to say how much I like your story. Please, keep writing and update soon, I want read more about how Harry will react when he wake up... if he wake up...
| kokomocalifornia 8/17/04 . chapter 6
please update asap.
ive add u to my fav stories list!
| Blackrose 8/17/04 . chapter 6
This is a great story. I hope Harry's alright. Wish Sirius could come back. He could help Harry. Can't believe they wrote him off in the first place. Where was the Order. I thought Dumbledore had someone watching the whle time. Hope to see more soon. Wish it were Lupin or Snape that came. And that Snape was a little nicer.
| you wear me like a complexxx 8/17/04 . chapter 6
Hey, it's your new beta here. lol. Anyway, hope you have fun on your little trip and kewl story so far. I can't wait to get my hands on the next chapter.
| Englishgirl 8/5/04 . chapter 5
| Spellcaster Hikaru 8/4/04 . chapter 5
This story is realy good! _ Chapter 5 seems to be kinda rushed though and at somepoints I can't read it clearly. Overall though good job! _ I hope you update soon.
| Joslin 8/4/04 . chapter 5
Oh Plz update soon. I really like this story. What's happening with Harry? Plz update soon!