PLEASE UPDATE!
i love this story!!

I really liked this chapter..

The Delancy thing seems to get over done, but i liked how you did it

cant wait to read more :)

This is one of my favorite stories...I really hope that you'll write more soon!

Maybe something could happen soon so that Kit will finally get rid of Madame! I can't wait for the day that happens...Keep up the good work! :)

Aww.. their little knights in shining armor. Gotta love those guys. Good story so far :)

wow! this fic is really good. Newsies has been one of my favs for a long time but i never put two and two together in that there might be fics for it. then when i finally figured it out it turns out that some of them are kinda weird. this one, i'm super happy to super cool. i think you should start matching kit up with one or maybe two of the guys (like foreshadowing stuff) if u haven't already thought of it.

Very very god!

update, update, update, soon!
I cant wait to read the next chapter!
Update ASAP!

Very cool story! This Chapter was one of my favs...Jack's too sweet. AND RACE! WE WANT MORE RACE! *ahem* Sorry about that...
Keep up the great work!

wow! i love it! I love racetrack... even tho he is like 26 now... He can wait for me! LOL Hope you Update son! :-D
Candy

Awesomeness! I ran away! Go me! lol...good thing too. Thanks for updating. I've been waitin for one. :) very nicely done chapter. Please update soon! Your story rocks!

THIS STORY ROCKS! YOU MUST KEEP GOING...too much caps lol...but you must keep it up!

-Casey

update soon!!

Yay you updated! This chapter rocked my socks off to Minneapolis! Heh, my town. YES THIS STORY ROCKS! UPDATE MORE SOON. Heh, poor Two-Bit and Kit they needs to find love. Especially Kit lol.

-Casey (Alex)

Cool...U should have a casting call..4 this if u do mine is...

Name:skylar salvato
Nick:Sunshine
hair:short blonde
eyes:brown
Personallity:Comedian and nice caring
Newsie:Spot Race Mush
age:14

Update SOON!story rocks!

Hey! Yay new chapter and darn my sister for erasing my old review. I can't even come close to duplicating its beautiful style and content . . . um, yeah . . . so just please bear (sp?) with me. This was a good chapter. Very good. One of my favorite chapters so far. I liked the park scene, that was good . . . especially how Les sat down to listen as well. Kit's staying very in character by somewhat rejecting the Newsies even though I think we all wish that she'd accept them (this is the public wish, the private wish is that Madame would go into a coma or something similar and Kit would be left to run the orphanage). Anyway, good chapter . . . enjoyed it muchly! YAY! Going to go now . . . need food . . . see you later.