I liked it. It was very... bitter. ^_^;; In a sarcastic, yet serious way. It was good.
Much *evil* love,
Sarah

You portrayed Ash's feelings perfectly, this was awesome.

Despite my personal views on Ashley having low self-esteem and needing to conform to make others happy, I still like her character, prolly cause I feel bad for her. But you wrote this beautifully, and I love it. Great Job!
J.