Wonderful wonderful wonderful!! I can't wait to read more. I think you could really turn this into an actual novel b/c it doesn't truly have much to do with the Ella Enchanted universe other than the fact that there are fairies, elves, and trolls...

An amazing story so far!

Hey! I really like this story, and I really hope you'll continue writing ;)

Anyways, how about using Maddok's idea and almost literally locking them up in a room together - or at least make them not leave for quite a while. Then Ares and Luna will get a chance to talk everything out and to satisfy each other physicaly - if you get my drift ;);)

Also, Maddok could perhaps find someone he could spend some time with that is not just a maid?? - but perhaps that should wait for later chapters/a sequel.

And, of course, maybe you should let Luna visit Eroz and Gideon and Quinn? I think she would really appreciate it!

Ta!

awesome story, love the plot lots, can't wait to see Gwen and whashisname screwed over by the prince
can't wait for the next chapter!

It's cute, but there's so much misunderstanding. Can an update be expected any time soon?

OK this story is the best i've read on fanfiction and thats a HUGE DEAL! But how this story have to do with Ella Enchanted?...Don't hate I'm just curious...

Also you havn't updated since '07 and that really sucks...especially if that is the end...So much still needs to happen!! plese don't give up on this story its beyond amazing SO PLESE UPDATE!

please please please please UPDATE!

is this story over? cuz if it is, its a pretty sucky ending. sorry. but if its not, can you PLEASE update?

please please please Write another chapter... in 10 you should have ares save Luna and... i haven't thought that far ahead yet... but I will!
ALWAYS and forever
Nyanonymous

please update soon i really like how you've done up this whole plot... it's addicting! love your work!
ALWAYS and forever
Nyanonymous

Please update soon. The story is awesome. I love it.

OMFG! This is such a good story! Update SOON!

Took him long enough to figure out! The idiot...

oh my god...

DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW GOOD THIS STORY IS? i started reading it and i didnt stop till i reached the end! that is the truth. it is two o'clock in the morning. wow! you have great talent. i can't wait to read more, so update soon please!! i love what you are doing and how the story is going. just don't stop. thanx for such an awesome story! i will be waiting for the next chapter. (which is hopefully coming soon...)hehe

Please update,you haven't in months and i am dying here!