Ah, yes Odjin is rather like a good chunk of the story is left to our imagination. I like how you discribed Ryu since I was thinking basically the same thing, all I could do was nod in agreement.

Oh I wanted to cry. Your skill to use great vocabulary is excellent! It was such in depth, it actually felt like the reader was in the story witnessing this. One of the best stories yet, in my opinion. Hope you write more someday! ^_^

Hmm, this story was indeed well written, telling of all the events in Bof V, and its good to see there are poeple who did like the game.
Anyway, if you could, please read and Review my one fic in this section.

Wow, very nicely done and a fitting end!
Odjn certainly had much more to his character and you've done it here.

Wow..that was a very beautifully written fanfic. I finally beat Dragon Quarter around January, but I too, have not yet achieved the Dragon Quarter ratio. Still, the wording you used was great, and the personification excellent. I got chills reading Ryu's epitaph. Great job!

Gee, I have no idea why no one has reviewed this as of yet. O_o; Waah, poor Ryu! *glomps him* He's so cute... Hey, this didn't seem to end so well for him though... My only complaint is that there wasn't more romance between him and Nina, because you know me, right? I simply live off of this love stuff, teehee. ^_^ BTW, I like details, but fortunately for you, I have never played Breath of Fire V, so if you made some mistake in the storyline or whatever, I really wouldn't know. You just got lucky! ^_~ My dear, you have got to work on your Bloody Roar and Darkstalkers fics... I'm craving a good read, so I demand that comply to me, damn it! *holds up a baseball bat in a threatening manner...* Don't forget to read & review chapter 19 of AKS! I just uploaded chapter 20 a few minutes ago, so now you have two chapters to absorb. :)

A short, but nice piece of work. Your use of words in this story are quite moving. I very much enjoyed reading it.