Is rinoa writing this?

Similar in concept to a story I'm writing (the advanced stages of GF memory loss, from Irvine's point of view). Good to see another person's take on the same idea.

This is great... Is this Irvine's perspective? Writing about how Selphie has died? OMG. This is totally fabulous, and I love the way you wrote it, the slight amnesia, never erasing the grief and pain from someone. Very intense, I might say, and it was grabbing at me from the moment I started reading it. Kind of like tearing something from me. Very deep, and you are one helluva great writer.

Crepy, in a vague, foggy, /empty/ sort of way. The lists - "Quistis died today." - are upsetting in their simplicity. They kind of hit me like Grief hit me - ow.
The "seeing her hurt" paragraph is particularly creepy, and the desscriptions are masterful.
And the ending? Powerful. The style here is unusual but really works to give the whole thing a distant, vague sort of feeling - something's wrong, but it's hard to tell what, exactly, and it seems like it ought to be something important, that you'd remember...

Shit. Now you've made me tear up.
This totally caught me unprepared. It's so quiet and sad.

Wow This is what we in the D.L.V.R. like to call "Retarded" you have no talent never write again please