hey... i actually found your fic by your author name... doremidan is really awesome haha. but um. anyway, i loved your poem. _ poor hatori. akito should stop hogging him all to himself. anyway. good job!

Kyaah! I love Hatori-san.

This is good! It captures Hatori (pre-Tohru) perfectly. I think meeting Tohru changed his outlook on life, if only a small part of it.