Really cute story!

That was really great. You really captured how a guy can change when he becomes a father. My guy was like that, hardcore badass til 5 seconds after ours was born and he's been a bowl of mush ever since;) I really enjoyed it.

oh so cute!!

love it. going to update soon? please finish!

ok, this is freaking fantastic! i love it. your writing is awesome and the interaction between the characters is fabulous :) not to mention that you involved all of the family, i like it. usually, Jimmy and the rest of Jess' family is left aside whereas i think they are great additons.
it's really a beautiful story and i hope you'll find the time, the motivation or whatever it is that's keeping you away and get back to this story.

She nodded. "I'm just... tired... and cranky... and hungry... and I want coffee... and French fries." "With or without the Nutella." Rory wrinkled her nose. "In retrospect, I can't believe I ate that." He laughed a little. "What about the salads?" "Hey," she defended. "I put Nutella on those." Jess squeezed his eyes shut and lay back against her again. "That's disgusting."

lol

“Yeah, old Grandpa Jimmy’s an **.” He sighed. “Grandma Lizzie never ever let Grandpa Jimmy forget that. Every time she sees Grandpa Jimmy she says ‘Jimmy, you’re an **.’ Those exact words. Then again, she’s neurotic, so I guess that makes us even.” He smiled down at the baby. “And never, ever forget that Grandpa Jimmy is one-hundred times smarter than Uncle TJ. Uncle TJ is a dunce.”
so funny

Luke nodded. “Leather jacket; bad attitude; cigarettes; book sticking out of her back pocket." “She’s Rory’s too,” Lorelai reminded him. “Two books, then.”


“She’s talking to a glass window,” Jess pointed out “Well, it’s a good thing there’s a psychiatric ward upstairs,” Luke replied.

these are my favorite lines in this chapter. I really like this story. you've done a good job

I thought this was a good story, worth an update!

i love this story and think it is really well written. I wish you would please update!

please update! i love this story and hope that you complete it.

Wow. This is totally awesome. I love the Nutella part in whatever chapter that is lol. You managed to keep the characters the same as they are in the show! Awesome work! I hope you update soon!

This is one freakin' awesome story. It seriously has everything in it that makes Gilmore Girls so great: quips, insults, jokes, Jess, and Emily being a snob. You've done so well and I wish that you would update! I want Liz and especially TJ to show up. I must praise the interactions you have with the characters, especially that first scene among Luke, Christopher, and Jimmy. Kudos!

It`s beautiful!! I love the way Jess behave around his daughter. And the thing with the bear - set. I WANT MORE!

This is such a cute beautiful story. Even though it is a little out of character for Jess and Jimmy I deffinatly think they would act that way if Jess ever became a father. I also like the fact that you brought in Jimmy Sasha and Lily I really like them and they only had them in a couple episodes and I think you write them very well. I am going to stop rambling now but hurry up and update I love it!