Awesome!

damn hot

I'm thoroughly amused by this. Unfortunately, I'd have to say that I actually have friends who did that, and the experience is quite similiar (if not a bit uncomfortable). But hey, friends are friends no matter how cooky they are. :) You should write more things like this, it's a great fic.

I like Hikari's logic... You take off your sundress... you'd feel better,too...
he he...
You, my not so close friend, are helping to save Fanfiction! Keep up the good work!

*giggles* Cute, sweetness. Very cute. I like the Kensuke... (Daiken! Daisuke jumped him first! *dies like Iori*)
So, um... yeah. I like it. It gets kind of long over the middle, with Miyako drawing out her little "tear Daisuke to shreds" moment, but it's otherwise fine and cute.
I think Hikari was OOC (stripping? Hikari? Kari-CHAN?), but your Miyako was good. Daisuke's always cute. *so biased*

I love it
I just love DaiKen