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Thimble 2008-09-14 . chapter 25
Interesting premise. I liked the way you developed it.
Tani Barton 2007-11-18 . chapter 25
I really enjoyed this a lot. This last chapter really did hit like a ton of bricks! I think you did a great job of capturing the relationship between Subaru and Seishirou, and an even better job of convincing me that Subaru's progression of emotions was realistic and that maybe things would work out for them despite everything. You did a really great job on this!
Bloodied Wings 2007-10-06 . chapter 25
O.o This review seems late. But just in case you're still with this, I wanted to tell you I love you and you're a freagin' god. I loved every bit of it, it was great in it's complexity and poor Subaru. I haven't read anything this good in the X fandom since I discovered Leareth. ^^
Mamoru 2005-03-16 . chapter 25
I loved it, best S+S fanfic I have ever read, really.
Decorinne 2004-09-14 . chapter 25
I know this is very late in coming and unlike most reviews it will not hasten the nextt part of the series because this one is over, but i still felt obligated to tell you that you are by far the best x/19 writer i have had the pleasure of reading. Wow. I have read hundreds of fictions by hundreds of authors and yours is definately in the top 3. You amaze me and i believe you captured the Subaru / Seishirou dynamic that many others miss. Thank you for giving me the privledge to read this amazing story. Sincerely,
Sutherland, Sarah
Dark Ice Angel 2004-07-05 . chapter 25
O_O

...

(*Gets all teary-eyed*)

(*Gapes*)

(*1 Ton of bricks comes flying out of nowhere, landing directly on DI Angel*)

(*Joyously screams*) THEY LIVE!

WOHO!! I
Dark Ice Angel 2004-07-05 . chapter 24
Aw, crap. Next comes the part where one (or both) of them die, and I bawl my eyes out because you're evil.

Ek!! I'm scared... I don't want to read it... but I do... but I don't!

Aww hell, here goes nothing...

DI Angel~
Dark Ice Angel 2004-07-05 . chapter 23
Party? Woohoo!! I love parties! Drinks all around!!

Wow, extremely insightful Kamui. Very glad you didn't portray him like so many other authors do, as a whiny, selfish brat. You actually allow him to have a brain and use it too!

Hmm... let's see what conclusions Subaru will come to.

DI Angel~
Dark Ice Angel 2004-07-05 . chapter 22
Whoa.

It almost seemed as though Seishirou was waiting for Subaru to say "I love you" just so he could disprove it. That short chapter was rather painful. Very bittersweet.

Subaru starting to remember things? Yay!!

And I can totally understand Seishirou's lax attitude towards his occupation. He grew up with death, knowing full well that his entire life would be characterized by the deaths of people at his hands. If you can't numb yourself and distance yourself from something like that, you will most definitely go insane. So, him being Seishirou, it must not be anything for him to joke about death.

It also seems as though he's trying to impress upon Subaru the fact that living with him means accepting even his job. Ouch, right?

Dark Ice Angel~
Dark Ice Angel 2004-07-05 . chapter 21
I don't know whether to be thrilled at the ending of this chapter, or scared of it. The implications of Seishirou and Subaru's conversation are both numerous and widespread, but the person effects are the most interesting.

It's a relief that they're finally talking! About something serious, about anything. And your characterization of Seishirou is amazingly accurate- as enigmatic as ever.

Whe!!
Dark Ice Angel~
Konnie-chan 2004-07-03 . chapter 25
Sorry it took me so long to review!! Midterms and stuff, sorry. Anyway, I was really worried about the end of this story, because it looked so hopeless, you know? Subaru kun needed a little hope, and you gave him that. The ending was just perfect, though a sequel wouldn't hurt, lol. Hugs!
Liviania 2004-06-22 . chapter 25
Wow...more like sixteen tons of bricks...but excellent ending, with room for each reader to imagine how they think the relationship will go.

Livi
HellFenix 2004-06-21 . chapter 25
i love this fic, I really do.
you're brilliant! the chapter was good.
Silent Seraphim 2004-06-20 . chapter 25
It... it... IT's OVER!?*Whimpers*
*sniffles* All the warm and fuzzy Subaru and Seishirou moments... and the angst... all gone. *Cries* Oh well... I'll have to commit this one to my favorites page, and re-read it umpteen times.
chamberlain 2004-06-20 . chapter 25
Amazing. Truly amazing. This was the chapter we were all waiting for, and we weren't disappointed. You did a fabulous job in depicting each of the charas, especially S&S. I can't say enough to express my appreciation for your fabulous writing style and imagination. Thank you for sharing this great piece of work with everyone. I hope you continue to write and explore the wonderful creativity lurking inside of you.
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