Just read this great story and i was not dissapointed.

You keept a even pace while telling/writing and the Characters came off natural. You even managed the Conflict in Logan well! Save a friend and condemn strangers. Or the other way around.

A great fic all the way. I'm just not sure, where the X3 fits in. I don't think she was needed here. And I was not sure what to think of her being' there!

Anyway great work and kudos!

Loved the story, I've read many of yours and you're a great writer.

Look, I don't know what planet you're from but people with disabilities don't get treated any differently. I know this from personal experience. There is therefore no reason he should be surprised that Juna accepts his 'condition'.

How can Logan jerk Max's hand away? If she's pushing the chair, she's behind him, way out of reach. Logan was pushed by a couple of people on DA without reacting - twice by the terrorists in Prodigy and once by Asha, not much different to being pushed by Max, IMO. I don't see this as being something that would make him pissy. Wouldn't have that effect on me. Hell, I'd like to be pushed around by a pretty girl ;). Logan might turn around with a 'do you mind?' look but I can't see him getting annoyed about it.

BTW, 'stretch out your tongue' should be 'stick out your tongue'.

This story is pretty good but you need to tell your beta to be more thorough. Logan and Max sound like English is not their first language. Your beta also should have caught things like, "all of the sudden." It should be 'all of a sudden.' Things like that made this hard to read. The plot is good, though. Keep writing, though, since it's just for fun.

The perfect ending loved the 'my' by Max and the hand on the shoulder at the end. Life Ain't Fair but sometimes having somebody to share it makes it easier thats what Max and Logan are all about and you wrote it great. Writting a story M/L.

i'll take your bait and write a story of my own...

this was grat... you gotta write some more...

That was a great story
Hope to see a sequel

Perfect ending. Hope you find time for another story soon.'Fraid i just don't have the talent to write, but i do appreciate a good story and this was definitely one.

excellent work, i absolutely loved this story! and the ending rocked too, you know it was kinda left open, like i don't know, for a sequel or something...*hint hint* Seriously a sequel would rock too! ok keep up the amazing writing.

Great story! Hope you've got some more brewing!

hey there, thanks for this one! too bad randy is gone- but i think you made the right choice, ( eventhough i wanted him alve when i reviewed you in the previous chapter ) - so now the title actually has a meaning- life aint fair! the MY logan thing was cool- i like it that it wasnt that "kind" fluffy ( what i call way over the top ) so you are right - it fitted better in this story.. oh yeah- I love this line ** Get over yourself and write a M/L story of your own, we need some more!* can i borrow that? hahah- Im serious , though - x x x - Original D

as much as i prefer the stories that have fluffy, very shippy endings, i agrew with you - this one was better fitted to the story...and anywayz, all the fluffy stories you've written have no endings so...

Excellent ending - very fitting to the story, and very season one. I liked the introspection . . . it helped to tie up the story without being overly final. Thanks for sharing this :)

don't worry...the shippiness was just right in this story...otherwise it wouldn't be as good. I liked how Max had to be the one to snap some sense into Logan.

Yes, there has been a serious lack of M/L fanfics on FFN lately. That's why I wrote my OWN M/L story. Check it out! And don't stop writing!

-- Jade

Ahh, the perfect epilogue for this story.

Logan might be comforted slightly by knowing Randy agreed with his decision; I can't imagine having to make the choice if Randy had wanted to go along with Brad's plan for the liver.

I've really enjoyed reading this fic--the action, the ethical dilemmas, the friendships, and the small signs of affection between Max and Logan.

Congratulations on a job well done!